Wanting you wanting me

A lady lives within the music of her heart

When bluebells cover the forest glade  

and sunlight permeates my thoughts of love 

I pause to say a prayer of mystery and light 

when nature knows that time is eternal... 

When raindrops fall against my window pane 

and dreams invade my moonlight night 

I long for your touch of tender sweet refrain 

when the veil is lifted and love remains... 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem reminds me of how I feel when my best friend (RIP 4 years) visits me during a quiet moment of observing nature. To me, "the veil" is the thing that separates the living from the dead, which is what sent me down this path as I read your bright words of affection. These are the feelings I feel when my angel/ghost stops by to share what's new! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Margie ... there are more things to heaven and earth than we can ever imagine... It was a delight to read your review and share your insight of the veil that lifts our spirits to feel the glow of mystery. truly, Pat

[barleygirl]

Sometimes we arrogant humans can't admit how much we don't really grasp about the universe, huh? *wink! wink!*

[Wondering Mind]

Beautifully romantic poetic expression...Loved the imagery.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Wondering... I appreciate your review of "Wanting you wanting me".
Sometimes we have to express what we want and make it happen....
if only in our dreams... truly, Pat

[aLittlePain]

Hello,

Richly romantic and imparts a sense of longing only born from deeply rooted connection. This leaves me feeling warm and content. Rach x

[emmajoy]

So few words but such precious and explicit ones. You've a touch of magic in your pen, Patricia, in that you juggle twenty six letters and create a sweet manual of 'how to give and share love'. Beautiful.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Emmajoy... you have given me a lilt of
Irish laughter this morning.
We have thunder and lightening at
five-thirty am. Laughter and lightening
is an ominous pair. Thank you, dear for
an exciting review. truly, Pat

[M P Ramesh]

PW,

Raindrops and moonlight and tender touch are the images/similes tried and discussed at length in world poetry and fiction. Once the same are felt re readable in such crisp piece, one may wonder the abundant treasure of poetic genius still keep unheard. The expectation is the only gift given by nature for writers , but with eternal confidence. All such are one and the output is also the same irrespective of language , culture , attitude. It has been proved ................... LOVE yes thoughts of love can be generated in many ways .........it is assured


excellent attempt..................


Carry on.........

MP Ramesh

[samparks,sam]

Nice poem last teo line say every thing

[Neville]

Love is just like this methinks & me knows from the top of me head to the tips of me toes. Another corker...All Good Things, N

[Pryde Foltz]

OHHH ... Patricia, no one can ever say you don't know how to write a romantic poem. You are truly gifted, my friend:):):)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Pryde, you have made my heart
sing like a bird on wing... Romance rocks!!
Thank you for your sweet review for
"Wanting you wanting me". truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

Aren't we the romantic one? The feeling of longing gives such loveliness to this, Pat.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly, I am honored to know that
you sensed a phenomenon of longing...
I suppose we were born with longing and
wanting to be loved and cherished. I am still
rocking in a tree top... when the wind blows...
I may fall more deeply in love... Thank you for your review.
truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

...it was my pleasure!

[Gee]

Not that you need me to tell you, but you do write with what seems like effortless beauty...

[Gee]

If that makes sense

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Gee, you are so kind... "effortless beauty" is
the nicest compliment ever... Like a bird that flies...
past clouds of inspiration... you made my day.
truly, Pat