A Wilder Life

A Wilder Life

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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A seasonal apothecary as nature provides enough flowers and herbs to detoxify the body...

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Nature provides a wealth of healing for 
the mind and body ... 
From flowers and herbs there are 
calming teas... 

Amethyst brings peace to lovers 
heart and soul...
Romance and love petals 
dance in preludes of birdsong... 

Perfume is gathered from 
essential oils of magnolia, 
rosemary, lavender, 
jasmine, rose and spice... 

A wealth of intimacy and romance 
may grow in your very own garden ... 
Seasons of beauty and eternal blessings 
with the pardon of sunshine and rain... 

© 2016 Patricia Wedel


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This was a very poetic piece. Lines like "Romance and love petals, dance in preludes of birdsong" really highlighted the vibe of the poem. Personally, I think it'd have more of an impact if the statement wasn't so general and was tightened up a bit. But if you just wanted to write and paint a picture, you accomplished that. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

dear Timothy, thank you for your review...
I am learning to be a poet. I appreciate your cr.. read more
Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

I appreciate your critique. I do prefer to
write in a more poetic style. truly, Pat



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I love how you share this information in such a flowing & glowing way, your choice of language is alluring. The way your words sing with persuasion is a demonstration of how the natural elements can also beckon to us. Not only do I like to use natural elements, but also I feel the essence of my special place here, when I ingest something that has grown wild here (like acorns) *smile* Great poem! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

Washington Grove, Maryland was organized by Methodists over a hundred years ago with tents in a Circ.. read more
Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

Homes were built to replace the Tents ⛺️, but the Circles still remain... the circles of love an.. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

AWESOME SHARING! Always a huge pleasure! *smile*
uplifted vibe of the poem ....creats a feeeling lyk a tyrst in a virescent field...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Pratikshya... a belated thank you for your charming review, albeit a year ago...
truly,.. read more
Very nice idea for a write. It is a miracle how man learned to use God's creations to feed, clothe and cleanse humans. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hey Patricia Wedel, you gone and nailed it with this one my fine literary friend. Everything comes together seamlessly, the title and each verse work splendidly and I absolutely wish I had penned the last verse...N

Posted 8 Years Ago


when i read this delightful write i could smell sandalwood incense or jasmine came to mind. what a harmonious write and yes if one nurtures the garden only rewards will be bestowed on the gardner or get shot by another cupid's arrow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

dear Andrew, lovely to read your review.
The scents of flowers and cedar wood as well as read more
A wealth of intimacy and romance
may grow in your very own garden ...
Seasons of beauty and eternal blessings
with the pardon of sunshine and rain...


I read 10 time , touch mind

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

dear Sam, I appreciate your review.
It is interesting how romantic nature
can be wi.. read more
This was a very poetic piece. Lines like "Romance and love petals, dance in preludes of birdsong" really highlighted the vibe of the poem. Personally, I think it'd have more of an impact if the statement wasn't so general and was tightened up a bit. But if you just wanted to write and paint a picture, you accomplished that. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

dear Timothy, thank you for your review...
I am learning to be a poet. I appreciate your cr.. read more
Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

I appreciate your critique. I do prefer to
write in a more poetic style. truly, Pat
I love the forest and the lakes too.
"Amethyst brings peace to lovers
heart and soul...
Romance and love petals
dance in preludes of birdsong... "
The above lines were my favorite. Your amazing description took reader to beautiful places and thoughts. Thank you Patricia for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

dear John, thank you for your
lovely review. Nature has a
wealth of beauty for us t.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I agree and you welcome Pat.
very peaceful and sensual write...calming..

love the last line..."the pardon of sunshine and rain"

intermittently we are absolved of our vanity and perhaps of our lust...but they return just as perennial flowers do..

love this write. Pat.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

dear Jacob, your review has been a balm
to my soul. Perennial flowers are like good
.. read more
Tisn't just the contents that heal but the words themselves. You've written with a gentle and soothing pen, Patricia.. it's beautiful from start to finish. As a horticulturist, etc.. i love to see and feel how people turn to the natural world and discover then kindly use its wonders.. They give so willingly, , as you have, thank you..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

8 Years Ago

As a horticulturist that was (is still, i spose) I so agree with you. Our earth offers magic we Hum.. read more
Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

dear Emma Joy, you are a sweetheart and I
appreciate your gentle ways. truly, Pat
emmajoy

8 Years Ago

Reciprocated! :)

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Keystone, WV



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