Buds waiting

Misty rain and soft sunshine awaken love

Buds sprouting wings 

flying over buttercups... 

serenading early morning dawn 

swooping down over the pond... 

Baby ducks paddle between 

waterlillies as nature's reverie falls 

silently upon the earth... 

Robin eggs burst with a tweet... 

Hollyhock and lavender wait 

for the spring dance to begin... 

Bluebirds bow and tease the 

ladies in waiting to scent the air... 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel the love in the air today...we have bluebirds around here where i live...it is out in the woods, and today is a beautiful spring day...75, mild breeze...and nature's reverie has fallen with a beautiful boom.

thank you for this poem..you have describe the view out my window perfectly.

j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob, our weather was the same today...
waiting for spring to blossom. I would miss the
change of seasons... the sweetness of spring and the
fire of fall. Shade for summer and shelter for winter.
I appreciate your review. truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

I would miss the change of seasons,
but I love the idea of living in the woods,
with plenty of wood for a fire in winter, and
shade of the trees in summer. truly, Pat

[Neville]

what wonderful words you weave dear Pat... and oh so bloomin true.......... Neville :)

[Manasa.L]

I could feel the early morning freshness, the waving leaves for the rumble of the air, the moist in the air, the dew on the leaves, the chirping of the birds....beautiful. Its Spring time, all those withered will gloom and shine in the rays of light.
Amazing, wonderful how you have framed in this poem....Lovely.
These days we don't get to see all this in the cities while they are growing to be a concrete forest with buildings and malls.
Thank you for this mind refreshing poem, I am completely overwhelmed with joy.

[Gee]

Beautiful,makes me realise how far behind some I lag in the poetry stakes.

[barleygirl]

One of the best dances of spring I've seen in awhile! Love all the details, packing your message with imagery for all the senses. Love this original line: "Robin eggs burst with a tweet" . . . plus I love all the activity as well as observations of the things that really turn me on about springtime.

[Corset]

The essence of spring, love how it all seems to come alive in your words. beautiful write Pat.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Corset, so charming of you
to read my poem "Buds waiting".
Spring is such a Tonic and even today was perfect.
The buds are becoming restless. Wishing you a
Lovely Spring and Summer too. truly, Pat

[Corset]

it was my pleasure Pat :0)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Spring is my favorite season... the season of new life... such a delightful way you describe it.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Ciwboy, Yes, Spring is a delight.
The birds are singing and trees are blooming
in melodies of colors. I appreciate your kind words.
truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Cowboy, I am intoxicated with Soring fever.
truly, Pat

[Mercy Fae]

Interesting use of images and feelings of spring. It flows well

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Ember, Soring has me dancing in the
breezes of sunshine sweetness.
I appreciate your review. truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful imagery entwined with beautiful emotions of appreciation. I feel the great coming and anticipation of the bounties in your words. Keep serenading ....:)))))

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami, I am find your review to be
Like buds on the tree, full of warmth and color, read moredear Sami, I am find your review to be
Like buds on the tree, full of warmth and color,
waiting for the perfect time to burst forth.
truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami☔️ Your review is like Spring
when showers and sunshine entwine
buds to burst with new life. truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............

[Lydia Shutter]

Like a magical dance of nature...a fantasia of sorts. What a precious painting you create with your words, Pat. Bluebirds, ducks, and buttercups.....the stuff springtime is made of! Beautiful. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi, a "Fantasia of sorts" is a charming review.
A Disney sort of song. truly, Pat

[MsJewel]

The beauty of a spring day... gorgeous poetry my dear friend.

Hugs, Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie, your review is similar to the tide coming in
like an old friend🍀 when the wind touched your hair
and the sea beckons you to stay. truly, Pat