Buntings and Tanagers in my dreams

Landing in a pile of feathers...

Being a Bunting by nature, 

you woo me with your songs 

Chasing me through the meadow 

we land in a pile of feathers... 

My Tanager heart wings toward you 

in colors of rhapsody in blue 

Turquoise tweets gather your 

heart's desire in serenades... 

Reviews

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A lovely ode to the majesty of birds.

Lovingly described and worded, you can feel the writers emotions towards the birds in this poem, the beauty of their colours, the symphony of their songs......

A lovely allusion.....a pile of feathers......the pillow on which our head rests as we sleep and dream....
An eloquent poem, Pat. Very sweet.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Doodley... Your review of "Buntings and Tanagers in my dreams"
has sent me on a voyage of discoveries... soft as an ocean breeze...
Thank you for sharing a dream... truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Charming to the bones. Serenading to the depths...Wonderful as always...:)...................

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami, you give a review of
heart and soul that makes romance
breathe like Hummers in search of
flowers and nectar. Thank you dear poet.
truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome. ...:).....

[Kelly Scheppers]

You woo your reader with romantic musings, Pat...I am loving the attention to color!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly, Your review of Buntings and
Tanagers has given me pause for basking
in the beauty of nature. You have the
bountiful beauty of our feathered friends. truly, Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Short and sweet... a lovely little romantic poem.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dale, Yiur review of my poem,
Buntings and Tanagers, has touched my
heart. Romance does have wings. truly, Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I am glad to hear that. I loe touching beautiful hearts like yours.

[emmajoy]

Aha.. so this is where the charm and colour of gentle poetry lies! I truly want to close my eyes and look and look at the way your words sing. They're tightly cosy and yet all embracing. Maybe i've landed in that 'pile of feathers'...

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Emmajoy, your review of Buntings and
Tanagers fill my dreams is almost like a sonnet...
a lullaby for dreams... being touched by a
butterfly. truly, Pat

[emmajoy]

Your poem's lovely, truly lovely.

[Lydia Shutter]

Beautifully romantic words, Pat! Love birds singing sweet serenades to one another.....heavy sigh. You have such a romantic soul, my friend. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi, your review is charming as always.
Landing in a pile of feathers seems to suit
y fancy. Knowing that birds survive the
most inclement weather gives me the
notion that we too can find the courage
to sing through it all season after season.
truly, Pat

[Adam Whitworth]

Its good, but how good? I always look at things wondering how to tweak them.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Adam, I appreciate your reading
my poem. Birds are so inspirational
to me in many ways. Their spirit
is extraordinary. truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is so cool...when i was a kid i had these little plastic models of birds that i painted...the first two i had were the Bunting and the Tanager...

i like the mix of colors here and the music of Rhapsody in Blue...

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob, how charming that you painted a
Bunting and a Tanager model bird as a boy.
read moredear Jacob, how charming that you painted a
Bunting and a Tanager model bird as a boy.
I just bought a book at a Library book sale
entitled Song Birds with gorgeous birds in
vivid colors. Love your review. Pat