You are the sweet succulent heart
of the artichoke...
dipped in creamy butter of
delicious desire...
You are Rhubarb in
early Spring dipped in
sugary kisses of love...
'Heart of the Artichoke'
Patricia Wedel,
I loved reading this. Softness and light, summer and music with the thread of love holding it all together. So beautiful. I am left yearning for winter to get moving and let Spring come on in. Winter is not finished of course but I love all the seasons.
Thanks for your writing.
Blessings,
Kathy
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
dearest Kathy… how charming to read your Review… It must be Great to live in a Climate that grow.. read moredearest Kathy… how charming to read your Review… It must be Great to live in a Climate that grows Artichokes… they are so healing to a troubled Soul… thanks for stopping by. Blessings of 💗 love in abundance. gently, Pat
3 Years Ago
Pat,
My parents have grown artichokes. They have learned and do all the right things to creat.. read morePat,
My parents have grown artichokes. They have learned and do all the right things to create perfect conditions for good food. Me, well my soil is quite acidic and trees shade a little too much but still every year I am out there working and trying. It's sometimes a challenge. You have inspired me! thanks for that.
Bless you.
Kathy
All I've had to eat since breakfast is a handful of fresh roasted peanuts, so now I'm possessed by the thought of an artichoke. And cheese. And bread. Rhubarb? Seriously, though, this terrific little poem is indicative of the thin line (in my mind, at least) that divides food from the big "L" word....love.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
dear Sam... I read your story about Smell of Oranges,
and hope to comment very soon. Your re.. read moredear Sam... I read your story about Smell of Oranges,
and hope to comment very soon. Your review of my
poem , Heart of Artichoke, made me smile. The various
tastes of food is really a treat. This summer we enjoy
Cottage cheese with strawberries or blueberries. My
husband Roger planted a lot of blueberry bushes in our
yard. They have matured into delicious plump and juicy
blueberries which are a great antioxidant. Lovely to
Have our own organic blueberries. They have beautiful
white bell-like blossoms in the Spring . truly... Pat
Summer sighs and bluest skies - again, you specialize in packing so much imagery into so few words. I love reading your work, thanks!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
dear Madison... I am thrilled to read your review. Thanks for
your Sunday morning sweet suns.. read moredear Madison... I am thrilled to read your review. Thanks for
your Sunday morning sweet sunshine. truly... Pat
I never thought of gardening and poetry together. My wife has a garden every summer, and we watch as the blooms gradually turn to whatever they are going to be. Before long neighbors are locking the doors to their cars for fear of having tomatoes, squash, or maybe a dozen cucumbers stuffed in the back seat.
This is visually delectable.
O' yes indeed Pat, they say the way to a man's heart is through his stomach, well you have certainly melted mine with such a fine, image filled, metaphorical banquet!
Srumdiddlyious.....can I have seconds please ?
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
dear Tom... your review is as mellow as
honeydew with cordon blue...
May your day be s.. read moredear Tom... your review is as mellow as
honeydew with cordon blue...
May your day be scrumptiously delicious....
truly... Pat
Mozart and Brie, what a glorious combination. Your poetry is a delight to all the senses Pat. I love this romantic little treat. Absolutely delicious!
:) Julie
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
dear Julie... your review is sweet as
Summer nectarines. Romantic overtures
of Mozart.. read moredear Julie... your review is sweet as
Summer nectarines. Romantic overtures
of Mozart with creamy Brie would be
Lovely by the sea. May the sea breezes
bring you songs of Mermaids' melodies.
truly... Pat
How do I love your poems Pat, this is such another one, that makes one hungry ;) it's litteraly food for the soul... your metaphors, for nature, food, and flowers, are always so rich, when you write poetry, and I love the heart of the Artichoke, which is the best part of this vegetable... your words, bring a classy and delightful taste. So intense romantic you are.
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
dear Elisa... how delectable to read your
review. Food and flowers are to be relished .. read moredear Elisa... how delectable to read your
review. Food and flowers are to be relished
with a passion...as is romance. The heart of
an artichoke is like a kiss. truly... Pat
Beautiful. But of course, even a humble cheeseburger tastes exquisite when one is in love.
Beccy.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
dear Beccy... Devouring the heart of an artichoke
Is a sensual experience which fills the rom.. read moredear Beccy... Devouring the heart of an artichoke
Is a sensual experience which fills the romantic
soul with pleasure. your review is savoured.
truly... Pat
Mozart, blue skies, and the juice of a succulent blueberry dripping from my lips.....well, if that is not the setting for romance, nothing is. Summer sighs indeed. Pat, when you wax poetic, the romance is stupendous and the imagery is multi layered. Fantastic poetry. Lydi**
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
dear Lydi... Waxing poetic is a charming review...
which I take right on que from you. Like .. read moredear Lydi... Waxing poetic is a charming review...
which I take right on que from you. Like a Peacock we
spread our wings. truly... Pat
Oh this is elegant and yummy Pat, my favorite food stuffed artichokes so you had me there...same old story, spring romance and food make lovers sigh...you made me hunger for both. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
dear Frieda... You light up my life...
like a lightening bug on a summer night.
So gl.. read moredear Frieda... You light up my life...
like a lightening bug on a summer night.
So glad my poem made you hunger for
love and romance. I love your charming
review. May your day be as lovely as
Summersweet flowers. truly... Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..