Antiquity of Love

Antiquity of Love

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Wrinkles caress your cheek as eyes twinkle in silver moonlight streams of violet scents...

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After a dinner of Shepherd's Pie and 
a dessert of Peach cobbler, 
we settled in the Parlour ...  
and listened to the player piano 
spilling over in love songs... 

Scents of lavender and roses 
penetrated the evening,  
and sweet tender kisses...  
invaded the lullabies of forever 
remembering the blossoms of Spring...  

Pleasant Dreams  

© 2014 Patricia Wedel


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What a romantic, relaxed overture, PAt. Can see it so clearly - near inhale that Shepherds Pie! In fact, you've truly servied up a delicious poem! (sorry!). Apart from the scent of roses and lavender, you could invisibly include Rosemary for ... memories. xx '.. listened to the player piano ~ spilling over in love songs...'

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest EmmaJoy... your review is a Treasure to recover. I love the scent of Rosemary,,, particular.. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

Smiling, now hungry for a snack of h/m bread with chopped black olives and a touch of basil.. Nothi.. read more



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You create beautiful place and scenery. Made me wish for Sherpherd Pie and the dessert of Peach cobbler.
"Scents of lavender and roses
penetrated the evening,
and sweet tender kisses...
invaded the lullabies of forever
remembering the blossoms of Spring... "
The above lines can stand on their own. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing lines:
"Scents of lavender and roses
penetrated the evening,
and sweet tender kisses...
invaded the lullabies of forever"

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Scents of lavender and roses
penetrated the evening,
and sweet tender kisses...
invaded the lullabies of forever
remembering the blossoms of Spring...

How could one not have pleasant dreams after this beauty of a write:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Pryde... Your review of Antiquity of Love is
so endearing. Wishing you parlor memories .. read more
Love the poetry in a good home cooked meal, you write about the simplest pleasures and yet they create such atmosphere.
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Madison... Lovely to read your
review of Antiquity of Love. Romance
is wining an.. read more
Couldn't help but have a pleasant dream after reading this lovely poem. May you remember those blossoms of spring forever.

Beccy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Beccy... Your enchanted review
rests easy on my heart.
Spring blossoms are press.. read more
So nice... Lovely words- dreamy, romantic and beautiful. Few words & a thousand emotions! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Sourav... Your appreciation of
romance is like the flight of a bumble
bee... very.. read more
I like the contrast of the domestic details of Shepherds Pie and Peach Cobbler that contrast with the romantic idealism. A very positive piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Escher ... Your review is charming.
I wish you lavender sunsets and may your
day.. read more
Those lullabies of forever are always melodic....and I could almost hear them while I read your words. Love that lasts through the years has the sweetness of peach cobbler and the heartiness of shepard's pie. You have created such a romantic and loving scene....one I want to crawl into. Beautifully written, Pat. So happy to see a poem from you. Lydi***

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Lydi.... you write the best reviews...
Love your slant on life... Pat
Extremely romantic with blossoming remembrances in the pleasantry of spring times. You do it right...:)......................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Sami... Your kindness makes heart prints
on vintage roses of love where shadows grace read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. Beautiful. Thank you kindly. You are welcome...:0......................

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Added on June 23, 2014
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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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