Thunder Snow

Thunder Snow

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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To experience thunder snow for the first time is a revelation of nature enveloping me in passionate wisps of excitement...leaving me entangled in droplets of ice and frosty brass horn kisses.

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I love lemon meringue sunshine mornings...
and I love you with your tender sky blue eyes
where a world of delicious secrets lie
on feathered pillows destiny...

You heal my wounded heart
with songs of love and laughter...
where rivers run to oceans deep
and angels in willows weep
in tangled honeysuckle vines...

Wild geese dance the minuet
against silver skies of memories...
where passions dwell and
Lovers forever sail on
clouds of dreams come true...

Whitewater waves roam about
looking for the perfect storm of
Thunder Snow sounds of beauty...
as the heavens sing Hallelujah
to winds of love's desire...
Amen...

© 2014 Patricia Wedel


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'Thunder Snow'
Patricia Wedel,
How darling this is! Symphonies of creation's lilting
heart songs give meaning to these, your words.
Ah love, how can we find the ways to be thankful.
Your poem sings of thankfulness!
'Wild geese dance the minuet
against silver skies of memories..
where passions dwell and
Lovers forever sail on
clouds of dreams come true..'
Bless you!
Kathy


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dearest Kathy... you make me feel like we share inspiration and that is the essence of friendship. .. read more



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My dear Pat, your words are exquisite, in bliss of better loving, living, seeing and all beliefs...
On my early morning here in Europe, I make a slight dance of happiness, to celebrate this fine writing.

I would give you my hand, to do an European dance, in the feeling of bliss. I feel it here too, my musical poetess, you dance with words, you reach beyond, and you let us all feel, how Hungary lives through your veins.

There is almighty too, which I do love in your words, you are a blessed soul, and I hug you my friend, thank you for sharing this wonderful pearl of live, living..... amen.

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

So lovely we feel the connection, I'm in love with Hungary, I always was, it's such a beautiful plac.. read more
Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Elisa... Lovely to read your note...
be in touch. May the winds of love
guide yo.. read more

10 Years Ago

I promise, I will, wishing you a beautiful Sunday sweet friend :) -x-
You're a true angel to have written this. Beautiful weaving of words!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Purple Quartz... I was thrilled to read your
review of Thunder Snow. You are an Angel t.. read more
Oh, you had me with that first line, I love lemon meringue, but lemon meringue sunshine, divine! Put a smile on my face even before my first sip of coffee, now that's nearly impossible. Love the title too, by the second stanza my heart was all warmed aglow. What a perfectly lovely way to start the day, I can think of none better, exquisite Pat.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Frieda... Your review trickles into my heart
like a mountain stream flows down a mountai.. read more
I can only say that what you have written here is beautiful to me, it touches something inside me,

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Paddy... you have rendered the most
lovely review. To touch another soul with
wo.. read more
I agree with Sami, what a lovely poem, well written and very unique i love it, and i also love how you word things and then give us great lines of romance, good job keep up the good work, i hope to see more poems like this, great stuff, your description is just beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Sean... I appreciate your reading Thunder Storm. Your
comments are delicious like Sunda.. read more
Seanh12

10 Years Ago

why thank you, reading these poem was delightful and wonderful, i look forward to reading more of yo.. read more
Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Paddy... I meant to refer to my poem
as Thunder Snow. A Thunder Storm is a quite
.. read more
A unique poem like this unique phenomenon. Awesome how you word it and gave us those lovely lines of romance...:).......

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Sami... awesome the way you give the
most charming reviews. I appreciate so
much.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly. You are welcome...:0................
"feathered pillows destiny"....what a great poetic phrase that is, Pat. Dreamy and magical! I liked the rhyming...and I think I enjoyed it even more because it was not in a particular scheme....it was here and there. The romance is in every line...which is no surprise because you are certainly a romantic, my friend. A sort of serene prayer to nature and lovers everywhere. Yes, I can imagine hearing the thunder during a snowstorm would be a surprise...such a unique experience. Pat, when you write poetry, it carries me away on a magic carpet ride. Wonderful. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Lydi... Your review is a gift beyond measure.
I feel as if we have shared a ride in a s.. read more
I've never experienced thunder snow, but your description is lovely - lemon meringue sunshine mornings...how delicious. Your poem is lovely Pat! :) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Julie... I adore your review... touching on
"lemon meringue morning sunshine"
an.. read more

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Added on February 19, 2014
Last Updated on February 19, 2014
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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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