Thunder Snow

To experience thunder snow for the first time is a revelation of nature enveloping me in passionate wisps of excitement...leaving me entangled in droplets of ice and frosty brass horn kisses.

I love lemon meringue sunshine mornings...
and I love you with your tender sky blue eyes
where a world of delicious secrets lie
on feathered pillows destiny...

You heal my wounded heart
with songs of love and laughter...
where rivers run to oceans deep
and angels in willows weep
in tangled honeysuckle vines...

Wild geese dance the minuet
against silver skies of memories...
where passions dwell and
Lovers forever sail on
clouds of dreams come true...

Whitewater waves roam about
looking for the perfect storm of
Thunder Snow sounds of beauty...
as the heavens sing Hallelujah
to winds of love's desire...
Amen...

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Thunder Snow'
Patricia Wedel,
How darling this is! Symphonies of creation's lilting
heart songs give meaning to these, your words.
Ah love, how can we find the ways to be thankful.
Your poem sings of thankfulness!
'Wild geese dance the minuet
against silver skies of memories..
where passions dwell and
Lovers forever sail on
clouds of dreams come true..'
Bless you!
Kathy

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Kathy... you make me feel like we share inspiration and that is the essence of friendship.
I actually heard thunder in a snowstorm that we had a few years ago as we were driving along the Rappahannock River in our city of Fredericksburg, Virginia. It was awesome. So glad you discovered my poem from a year ago or more. I think this has to be my favorite that I was inspired to create. Thank you Kathy for finding a poem with fond memories. truly, Pat

[Tom]

Such an inspirational poem, full of wondrous imagery that exemplifies the candid love and intense emotion that surrounds the subject !

A captivating piece of writing Patricia !

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Tom... Your review of Thunder Snow
is delightful as summer berries.
May your summer showers
create rainbows of love and beauty.
truly... Pat

[Aethereal]

This was a lovely read all the way from its introduction to its last verb. It reads like the kind of love letter that a swashbuckling fictional man-of-letters such as Cyrano De Bergerac would have written for his friend. You have the gift. “lemon meringue sunshine” burns through the morning’s mist.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Aethereal... your review is like
walking through a waterfall and seeing
a rainbow of possibilities. Hope your
Summer has been a meadow of flowers in
bloom ... truly... Pat

[Zahra]

a beautifully crafted piece. Loved the first stanza.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Voice... I am delighted to read your
review of Thunder Storm. I love having a
Nook to keep my heart etchings and poets
to share on the high seas of inspiration. truly... Pat

[Pryde Foltz]

I must say your poems are a sensory delight. This one did not disappoint, Fabulous write.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Pryde... Your review of Thunder Snow is
as sweet as strawberries in summer. I trust you
are touched with tenderness and love. truly ... Pat

[Kitten]

Oh my goodness! This is marvelous! The imagery beautiful and the emotion behind your words is immense. I loved every bit of this poem! You've composed a great piece here! Wonderful work Miss Patricia! I look forward to reading more of your work! :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kitten... Your review of Thunder Snow is
a sweet minuet that dances on my heart.
truly... Pat

[Tina Louise UK]

Gorgeous piece...again such wonderful imagery :) x

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Tina... Thank you for reading
Thunder Snow. Your review is tied
with a ribbon of blue rhapsodies.
truly... Pat

[Stephen]

A heartfelt poem which's filled with the droplets of your love. Your heart wished to have some drops of love feelings the breeze of bodies. Twisting lips off, changing colors red to white, brushing the keratin and loving the eyes ...all the elements of love're gratifying lovingly penned.

Keep on!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Stephen... Your review of Thunder Snow is
compared to a summer day of meadow flowers read moredear Stephen... Your review of Thunder Snow is
compared to a summer day of meadow flowers
and birdsong. truly... Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very cool opening line… the whole poem has a loving spirituality about it that is soul soothing.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Cowboy... Your comment is very charming.
Please forgive me for roaming the prairie of my
heart to find the tumbleweeds to express my
Feelings when I read your review. Thunder snow
Is very romantic and I am pleased that you took
the time to express your feelings. truly... Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Never apologize for looking for your feelings. You are welcome. It was a pleasure to read.

[emmajoy]

There are phrases and thoughts in your poem that rich men would pay millions for, if only to have the magic of your sweet gifts: the flow of true human senses and the ability to dance mere letters into memorable literature. I feel a smile growing inside me.. today's wondrous first read. Thank you!

The probable inspiration for your poem is lovely: ' To experience thunder snow for the first time is a revelation of nature enveloping me in passionate wisps of excitement...leaving me entangled in droplets of ice and frosty brass horn kisses..' That is awareness of the nth degree!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Emma Joy... Your review had me
swinging from a star. Nature can be
inspirational... but poets like you are the
blossoms on the trees and the soft gentle breeze.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Emma... I look forward to reading
your poetry. Here in Virginia USA, we are
waiting for tulips and hyacinths along with
daffodils to trumpet in the joy of Spring.
truly... Pat