"Romancing a Kettle of Tea"
Patricia Wedel,
Between the "rosebuds, tea brewed with tenderness, lemon and honey sweetness"I wanted to rejoice in this lovely morning breakfast with a familiar and special someone. "Biscuits with orange marmalade... I found this line to be symbolic and a lead in to romance beautiful. Also "Breezes from another world..."
It flows, it rhythms.
Blessings, and I hope you may enjoy more of these moments.
Kathy
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
dear Kathy... thanks for stopping by...
lovely to have a venue to express our feeling. trul.. read moredear Kathy... thanks for stopping by...
lovely to have a venue to express our feeling. truly, Pat
6 Years Ago
Patricia Wedel,
Absolutely true. I wish you good things and a little fun stirred in with peac.. read morePatricia Wedel,
Absolutely true. I wish you good things and a little fun stirred in with peace and joy!
Kathy
I searched what Je t'dore meant. Then I wasn't distracted by it. Then read it again and enjoyed how your unique structure let your love flow through it. I enjoy rhyming poetry.
When I read your poems it makes me believe that the art of Romance is not lost.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
dearest Ana... going back to am earlier poem is a lovely gesture.... our style may change; however .. read moredearest Ana... going back to am earlier poem is a lovely gesture.... our style may change; however romance is always embraced, I appreciate you artful review. truly, Pat
"Romancing a Kettle of Tea"
Patricia Wedel,
Between the "rosebuds, tea brewed with tenderness, lemon and honey sweetness"I wanted to rejoice in this lovely morning breakfast with a familiar and special someone. "Biscuits with orange marmalade... I found this line to be symbolic and a lead in to romance beautiful. Also "Breezes from another world..."
It flows, it rhythms.
Blessings, and I hope you may enjoy more of these moments.
Kathy
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
dear Kathy... thanks for stopping by...
lovely to have a venue to express our feeling. trul.. read moredear Kathy... thanks for stopping by...
lovely to have a venue to express our feeling. truly, Pat
6 Years Ago
Patricia Wedel,
Absolutely true. I wish you good things and a little fun stirred in with peac.. read morePatricia Wedel,
Absolutely true. I wish you good things and a little fun stirred in with peace and joy!
Kathy
This is delightfully fragrant poetry, just my cup of tea. Lovely Pat!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
dear Paloma... "fragrant poetry" is a sweet refrain...
like dancing in the rain... truly, Pa.. read moredear Paloma... "fragrant poetry" is a sweet refrain...
like dancing in the rain... truly, Pat
8 Years Ago
Always a pleasure, I so enjoy your lovely refrains.
What another delicate soft write romantic of tea. Lovely imagery I could almost smell the fragrance. I love that lapsang souchong tea, a smoky black china tea! A lovely write Pat. Enjoy your tea!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
dear Andrew, your comment is a lovely gift
now that autumn is in the air... It makes me thin.. read moredear Andrew, your comment is a lovely gift
now that autumn is in the air... It makes me think
of the song... "A Nightingale sang in Berkley Square".
I must try the smokey black China tea that you mentioned.
Enjoy your autumn with enchanting colors of
gold and Crimson. truly, Pat
Your writing is soft and wispy. I like it very much. Valentine
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
dear Valentine... Thank you for reviewing
one of my older poems. Glad you feel it is wispy... read moredear Valentine... Thank you for reviewing
one of my older poems. Glad you feel it is wispy.
You made my day. Hope your day is full of sweet surprises.
truly, Pat
you changed the rhyme scheme in the 4th verse and stretched the rhyming in the closing line ..the flow is not interrupted and i found that intellectually intriguing .. the very best tea comes from a conscientiously ended kettle ;) not quite the seriousness of the Japanese Tea Ceremony but the reverence of the brew ... in the first line i kept wanting to read rose hips .. which took me back to the 60's in Taos, NM ..a time of wonderment, love peace and flowers and ....rose hips tea ;)
both my mom and my g-ma had just those painted china cups .. so delicate .. the only thing i do not like about this poem is that i missed the party Alice! :)
E.
dear E... so delightful to have you join me
in a cup of rose hip tea... Your review of read moredear E... so delightful to have you join me
in a cup of rose hip tea... Your review of
Romancing a Kettle of Tea falls softly
on my mind, as you are most tenderly
graciously kind, my friend🎶🌹 truly, Pat
9 Years Ago
dear E... your review is so delicately
rendered and graciously accepted.
You have i.. read moredear E... your review is so delicately
rendered and graciously accepted.
You have indeed exceeded my
expectations. truly, Pat
You paint a lovely, lovely picture with with this tender, almost dreamy poem.
'Lemon and honey sweetness, biscuits with orange marmalade.' Mmhh, delicious.
Beccy.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
dear Beccy... Never too late to thank you
for your delicious review of Romancing a
K.. read moredear Beccy... Never too late to thank you
for your delicious review of Romancing a
Kettle of Tea. May your Autumn be a
time of sweet reflection. truly, Pat
dear Patricia, a Poet
read one of my first older poems recently.
I realize I had no.. read moredear Patricia, a Poet
read one of my first older poems recently.
I realize I had not thanked a few poets for their
review a year or two ago. I do appreciate your
reading. "Lovely" is an endearing comment. truly, Pat
This is how life and emotion should be, this is how poetry should make a reader feel: calm, happy and -swept into another time and place. Your words could so easily become a beautiful painting!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
dear Emmajoy... a delightful review of "Romancing a Kettle of Tea".
We need to make more ti.. read moredear Emmajoy... a delightful review of "Romancing a Kettle of Tea".
We need to make more time for the quiet romance of
sipping tea. truly, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..