A Blind Stranger Complimented me on my beauty

A poem about a girl and her twisted reality. ->Confessions of a teenage outcast part 2<-

The empty feeling I get,

The blood rushes to my head,

Clouded thoughts, watery eyes,

I wish I had a disguise,

"Beautiful" he mumbles,

My heart crumbles,

If only he knew what lay underneath,

What hides below this sheath,

My concience reminds me of his words,

A blind stranger complimented me on my beauty,

But my mirror did its duty,

The pedestal of beauty was broken at the base,

He was clearly not talking about my face,

The mirror, my sweet reality,

Reminds me of my wretched brutality.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write even in its wretched brutality...Bravo.................

[Patricia Hernandez]

Thank you so much, i was starting to think nobody had liked it... :) so thanks

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................