Breathless

Breathless

A Poem by Patches I'm not so new anymore.
"

How I feel when talking to my Love

"

Life isn't measured

by the number of

breaths we take.

 

It is measured

by the moments

that leave us breathless.

 

When next we speak

that moment will

leave me breathless

© 2011 Patches I'm not so new anymore.


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Simple, incredibly well constructed and concise. I love simple and effective poetry like this and this particular poem comes with a clear, heartfelt message. It's very easy to descend into cliche when doing something like this however you've managed to avoid that anvil simply by taking the core of love and emotion back to its routes and dealing with raw emotion/feeling and the effect it has on us all. A very well done, Good work :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Such a deep truth in so few word and what wonderful hope and surety at the end. Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


How true..so much said in so few words..Good one..Lola nd God bless..Kathie

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ai these moments are sadly too far apart and not enough of them to go around to everyone. Magical is this write and it is so true. I like when someone takes my breath away but I like it more when I take theirs away first. :) Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Simple, incredibly well constructed and concise. I love simple and effective poetry like this and this particular poem comes with a clear, heartfelt message. It's very easy to descend into cliche when doing something like this however you've managed to avoid that anvil simply by taking the core of love and emotion back to its routes and dealing with raw emotion/feeling and the effect it has on us all. A very well done, Good work :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 26, 2011
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