Caught

A whimsey of a poem that fortuneately turned out to be true but not at the age mentioned

Twenty-six--- in the prime of me life.

A carefree lad without any strife.

Thought something amiss, but knew not what

dang me though I was about to find out!

 

She sports dark hair, the eyes of a tiger

lordy, oh lordy how she kindled my fire.

Her lips red, red as Bing cherries

and moist, so moist like dew laden strawberries.

 

Statuesque she is not stands only 5' 2"

with the face of an angel, body beautiful too.

Like a fey she is, a sprite wild and free

her come hither look hypnotized me.

 

A kiss she teased with, then danced away---

I stood there dumbfounded, nothing could I say.

She danced to me again, coming quite close.

I reached to grab her and had her---- almost.

 

Her laughter rang like a crystal bell.

With a grin mischievous, and eyes alight

She knew she had me---

wasn't much of a fight.

 

The old addage has once again

proved to be true---

A man will chase a girl

until she catches you!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

It is really wonderful when she catches you. It is also just as lovely when she already knows she has you before she ever claims you. Women always seem to possess the power to make men feel inside like a light has been turned on inside of us making us glow because we know her. Excellent poem.

[Valentine]

Patches, not this one was not only cute but very cleverly written..Great write..lol and God bless...Bratress

[Marie Harrison]

You were a goner from the first glance. Sometimes love at first sight is true. Cute poem.

[Robin]

nice catch !

[Chris38]

This wss quite different for you. An entertainign piece though and there is a lot of truth in the last few lines.

[Magdelena]

Now this was indeed a catch piece.. I liked how you brought this forth, the images, hmmmmm, indeed good. Sounds like some kinda girl alright!

Nice one here.

Huggers,
Mags xx