Skinned Knees

Skinned Knees

A Poem by Patches I'm not so new anymore.
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A poem describing what should have been

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You are part of me,

 I am part of you---

 Every strand of our beings

 were meant to be woven together.

 

We are no longer young,

 sometimes when the light is right

 I notice tiny lines in your face.

 

Lines that define a woman

 of character,

of dignity, of grace.

 

Where were you?

 Where was I?

Why could we not have met

 

known each other

 before the road

forked...

 

became strewn with

rock-hard words

that tore our souls...

 

allowing love to seep

slowly into

the dirt of dispare.

 

Why were we destined to

travel pot-holed paths,

 to trip---

 

skin our hearts, our knees

before the road came together

 once again?

 

 

 

© 2011 Patches I'm not so new anymore.


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Life is full of dissappointments which often bring dispair and what should have been simply isn't in the cards often times~ deeply expressed emotions spring forth in this nicely penned piece

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very powerful and beautiful. The sadness is very clear and it leaves a haunting feeling. A wonderful read that I'm glad I got to experience!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 18, 2011
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