Chapter 23- If Your Opponent Stumbles, Take Advantage Of It

Chapter 23- If Your Opponent Stumbles, Take Advantage Of It

A Chapter by Ace D Portgas

The scene suddenly changes back to Skymon and Myles. Skymon is getting ready to gloat

 

Skymon: “You did put up somewhat of a decent fight” (Then he turns his attention over to Kidd.) “Looks like it’s time for you to get the same fate as your Captain. It d-“

 

Before Skymon can finish talking there is finally some movement coming from under the rubble. A few seconds later Myles comes out, breathing kind of hard but appears to be unscathed although he does have a cut going diagonally over his eye. Skymon and Kidd looked shocked.

 

Skymon (pretty mad): “How the hell did you manage to survive that, let alone come off scotch-free?”

 

Myles: “I managed to encase myself in ice before the attack connected.”

 

A flashback shows Myles forming his hands together and creating ice right before the attack hit. He wasn’t quick enough to get some of his head blocked which explains his cut.

 

Skymon: “What the hell took you so long to come out?”

 

A sweat drop runs down Myles face.

 

Myles: “Well when I encased myself in the ice, I kind of got stuck and sort of had to break myself out.”

 

Myles is punching the air pretending he’s trying to get out the ice. Both Skymon and Kidd have sweat drops

 

Kidd: “Pretty embarrassing.”

 

Skymon: “Either way you’re starting to become an annoyance with that ice of yours.”

 

Skymon then does something with his hands. The wind is clearly visible surrounding Skymon’s arms and a sharp, slashing sound is heard as well.

 

Skymon: “If you don’t mind I’m just going to cut you up a bit.”

 

Skymon charges towards Myles and Myles begins to cover his hand in ice. Myles is thinking to himself

 

Myles: “S**t, I was not expecting to fight someone this strong just yet. Not while I just begun to get the hang of this Ice ability. I was thinking I could practice on someone weaker first.”

 

An image pops up into Myles head of a clown and someone wearing a hamburger costume. Skymon gets right up to Myles stomach and throws a punch toward him. Myles evades so Skymon’s fist misses but the wind surrounding his hand is able to connect and leave a cut on Myles side.

 

Myles: “S**t!”

 

Skymon throws a punch toward Myles face. Myles is able to hold his hands up and guard but you can hear the sound of Skymon’s wind cutting Myles ice.

 

Myles (thinking): “Let me see if this works”

 

Myles is trading punches with Skymon and while he is doing that he is taking his foot and using his ice to make the floor slippery, hoping Skymon doesn’t notice. Several seconds later Skymon begins to lose his footing which cause him to stumble.

 

Myles: “Bingo”

 

He takes advantage of this and Myles places his hand on Skymon’s chest. He then freezes his hand on his chest.

 

Skymon: “What the hell are you doing?!”

 

Myles: “Defeating you.” 



© 2011 Ace D Portgas


Author's Note

Ace D Portgas
Writer's Secret: Yeah we had no clue what direction this story was going at first. Which is why we jump straight into the action

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YAY TO MYLES!!!!!!!!! I love his powers. I am glad that he froze that thug Skymon. He isn't a weakling at all. I love Myles too! I love almost all your characters! This chapter was awesome. I would love to see this drawn xD Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


GO MYLES GO!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


YES! MYLES TAKES THE LEAD!

Posted 13 Years Ago


looks like the writer likes anime 2..lolz

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really like how you use Myles powers. But I have to ask: Where's Soren?

Posted 13 Years Ago


Myles fist-pumping made me laugh! And I love the ice on floor trick, very clever. To the writer's secret: I kind of figured that from the way it's just action upon action, but it's very nicely done!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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