Until We Find Our Saviour

Until We Find Our Saviour

A Poem by That one kid
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Im not really sure about this one i will admit. Im still kind of new to writing

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When some feel overwhelmed
The room starts to spin
A pounding in the head begins
The walls close in
The chest caves, out of breath heart racing.
Until we find our saviour.
When some feel sad
The world comes down on our shoulders
Our tears crashing amongst the ground like boulders  Our heart heavy with grief
Head hung low in sorrow
Until we find our saviour.
What is a saviour? The answer varies on the person. What is a saviour to you? Unsure of an answer, ill give you an idea of mine.
A saviour is one that comes in time of need. Music some may say. A person most will admit. No matter what it may be, every living, breathing, creature has one. While you ponder the questions of what it is and what is it to you, ill ask you this; what does one do when one happens to hit the saviour? Never physical but with current actions. Betrayal? Using words to get into the mind of your peer? Toying with emotions? All closely related, yet so different. Nothing really helps until we find our saving grace.
Until we find our saviour.

© 2018 That one kid


Author's Note

That one kid
Just uh let me know what you think, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.

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Added on January 18, 2018
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That one kid
That one kid

Lampasas, TX



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A Poem by That one kid