Dance of Lovers

Dance of Lovers

A Poem by Tatiana Raudales

Melodious tune followed gracefully By the sound of distant cries Overpowered by sad violins

Let's take a deep breathe Before we begin The dance of lovers Intertwine our fingers And bind our souls Let's see if we match these Undying roles

At first it seems magical With the glitter covering up All their doubts The violin is so loud It cancels out their cries

Let's take a deep breathe Before we begin The dance of lovers Whether you are traditional Or pure eccentricity Flow to the beat With endearing electricity

Melodious tune, how beautiful You seem from the outside But the dancers can't stop

Once you stumble over her beauteous lips Or upon the thickness of his brows You're stuck, dancing along Dancing along with the hopeless lovers

© 2016 Tatiana Raudales


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Absolutely beautiful poem. I felt I could hear the violins playing and the couple was dancing in front of my eyes! "The dance of lovers
Intertwine our fingers
And bind our souls
Let's see if we match these
Undying roles" this is my favourite part of the poem....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Absolutely beautiful poem. I felt I could hear the violins playing and the couple was dancing in front of my eyes! "The dance of lovers
Intertwine our fingers
And bind our souls
Let's see if we match these
Undying roles" this is my favourite part of the poem....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetically magical!!! How amazingly you have written this, as I read the lines I feel the silent tune playing in the background and pairs of lovers dancing along with the melody of the tune... I loved the concept of it, so passionate and heartfelt... I like your wordings too, kind of compliments the peaceful nature of the poem... very well done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tatiana Raudales
Tatiana Raudales

Oviedo, FL



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