The Shadow

The Shadow

A Poem by S.A. Laminak

I, Shadow of the Night,

Beneath the starless sky,

Seep through windows,

Away from light,

And into forest,

 I do hide.

Where no iris,

Shall maunder on,

The dark thing I’ve become.

© 2013 S.A. Laminak


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very nice poetry...actually i like dark poetry...I used this format too...so thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like it. The feeling I got from just reading it versus your YT interpretation were vastly different which was cool.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

S.A. Laminak

10 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
Ooh! Really like this piece! Dark and deep, yet subtle at the same time. Especially like the last 2 lines, amazing write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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marty360

10 Years Ago

Last 3 lines*
S.A. Laminak

10 Years Ago

Thank you! This is the verbal rendition I made a while back. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f--uqLWQ.. read more

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Added on December 30, 2013
Last Updated on December 30, 2013
Tags: Dark, muder, shadow, starless, forest

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S.A. Laminak
S.A. Laminak

Clarkston, WA



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