A Whimsicle

it's a whimsical treat!

A whimsicle is not sweet,
it has the smell and properties
of Grandmother’s beets.
It may hurt your teeth.
It’s certainly neat.
Many things belong on sticks such as olives and meat.
But a creamsicle for example, it is not, because that melts in the heat.
You can have that if you like, once you’ve wiped your feet.
I’ve never met a dog who didn’t pant and plead.
Or a child who didn’t jump off his seat.
But what a whimsicle is .. I can’t figure out. .
I’m beat.
Because it’s an icicle popsicle whimsicle treat.

Reviews

[Richard]

The way you write is just a treasure itself, and a whim itself, your mind meets so many corners, and put them brilliantly together, into this, I enjoyed it very much, to mind jump here.

- Elisa

[Richard]

thank you so much Elisa I can't tell you how nice it is to hear that :)

It is my pleasure to delve into anothers mind :) and try to understand it :D keep on writing YOU!

[Richard]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

A treat of a write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Richard]

you're welcome thank you very much :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Meliss@k]

The flow of this poem is absolutely wonderful and the imagery was simple, yet just right!

[Richard]

n'awww thank you so much :)