Love At First Write

Sometimes a person’s poetry strikes a chord so deep it’s like falling in love.

Your poetry, sensual and sweet

Swept me off my feet

Caressed me with your words

As emotions and passion surged

Embraced me with your light

It was love at your first write.

Reviews

[Amy R]

I love love this poem.
The rhymes and everything ..

"Embraced me with your light
It was love at your first write."

How perfectly fine you expressed this.
I felt that in many ways 💕💕

[Dara]

Thank you so much. I think many writers may have had the same experience. To know someone on a deeper level through their thoughts expressed in writing is a whole other dimension. The beauty of poetry.

[Amy R]

Very true, and you're most welcome.

[Mavy]

Short yet very impactful! And I love the rhyme.

[Dara]

Thank you so much. It is great to see you visited my page. Looking forward to sharing more writing with you!

[Rachid Amrani]

What a beautiful poem, Dara! The words rhyme like a sweet tune of an orchestra. Well written.

[Dara]

I am so glad you liked it. Meeting someone through their writing gives you a whole other perspective. So often the heart and soul are revealed when you might not grasp it right away in person. Thank you for your thoughts!

[Rachid Amrani]

So true. My pleasure.

[Ken Simm.]

Very lovely in its The structure is superb..

[Dara]

Thank you so much. I am pleased and honored to see your presence. It made my day. :-))

[Kelly Scheppers]

How beautiful! You certainly have a way with words, my friend. I hope your Abby girl is doing well. I think about her every day! xo

[Dara]

Thank you so much my friend. My words are coming back in bits and pieces. I am so happy you enjoyed this. Also, I am grateful for your thoughts for Abbey. She is doing quite well considering. Keeping my fingers crossed. Take care!

[emmajoygreen]

Seems your words explain - and obviously feel, how words introduce possible friendship. Seems a mix and meld of twenty six letters can be an extraordinary introduction! Your writing has been like that for ever and a time. Take care, keep safe, well and happy; come back soon and share more of your thoughts, please. x

[Dara]

Hello Emma and thank you from the bottom of this old heart. It’s true and amazing what a mere 26 letters can do. For one, they helped carry me across the ocean to pay my last respects to a very dear poet friend. If more people read and loved poetry the world would be a better place. Your presence always always makes my day. Take care and have a wonderful weekend!

[Dara]

Dear Chris, thank you for your wonderful review. I haven’t been writing much lately but every once in awhile I get inspired to jot down a few lines or so. I look forward to reading more of you as well. Take care!

[Chris Shaw]

You too Dara. Lovely when that inspiration comes. Take care and have a good weekend:)

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Dara, it is so true what you have expressed in your poem. We do connect deeply to what some poets write. Their words can have such impact. Hope you are well and it!s good to see a post from you. Happy Thursday.

Chris

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

dear Dara. I agree, I fancy words, and the inspirations within them, 1809 Black Plague December

[Dara]

Our writing can reveal our innermost thoughts and desires that we may never express otherwise. Thank you very much for stopping by to read some of mine.

[1809 Black Plague December]

most welcome Dara, yes, even a crush can build from it; :D----maynard

[Coyote Poetry]

We do fall in love with the poets and the writers dear Dara. Their words awake our mind and our thoughts. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dara]

Hello my friend! Yes, it is so true. While we may never meet in person we know and love them through their words. If the “eyes are windows to the soul”, perhaps poetry is the window to our hearts. Just a thought on this beautiful Monday morning. Take care dear Coyote!

[Dara]

I should have said, ‘Sunday morning.’ Lol