My Life in Autumn

One from the archives.....

In the autumn of my life

I will always remember

the moments that gave me joy 

and friendships that I treasured.

I will see a little clearer

the air will seem much sweeter

the sky a little bluer

in the autumn of my life.

In the autumn of my life 

I will think of all the good times

not dwell on past mistakes  

or troubles I have seen.

I will love a little deeper

sing a little louder

forgive a whole lot better

in the autumn of my life.

In the autumn of my life  

I will know what really matters

what truly makes me happy

and accept what I can’t change.

I will embrace my friends and family

let them know how much I love them

and hold on a little longer

to the autumn of my life.

Reviews

[Kerra]

Such a wonderful, heartfelt read. I enjoyed this write, love the layout as well

[Dara]

I just realized I didn’t reply to your wonderful review. A thousand apologies and thank you so much. I appreciate your visit!

[Unspoken poet]

This is so beautiful and touching, So nicely written and creative. I enjoyed this

[Dara]

It pleases me that you enjoyed my trip down nostalgia lane. Thank you for your very kind words!

[Relic]

This could also be a new year's resolution.

This is really nice to read and ponder.

[Dara]

Yes, it definitely could be especially considering the year we have had. It is great to see you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Happy New Year!

[Jess]

I feel like this poem has forced a moment of self reflection on me and I LOVE IT! Wonderful words that evoke a strong emotional response. Beautifully done!

[Dara]

I am so happy that my words had that effect on you. Great of you to take the time to read and contemplate the meaning. Thank you so much for sharing your own thoughts!

[barleygirl]

Even tho I love what you're saying & how you say it, I am left wondering -- WHY WAIT? Why is this about the autumn of one's life? Why couldn't it be all life? Being autumnal myself, I admit we fallible humans do not take the time to be kind & caring & patient while we're in the thick of living, with all the stresses & sinewaves of motion. But then we get old & we have time to consider the life we've led. That's why we wait, but your poem doesn't really have to! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dara]

You are so right. We should not wait and enjoy each day to its fullest. Maybe it has something to do with slowing down a bit and not getting caught up in the overwhelming day to day things that we get tangled up with when we are younger. But definitely should not wait! Thank you for sharing your insight and inspiring words.

[Wórdsmíth]

a couple of minutes earlier before diving into your profile, i read one of the poetry called 'Roses with scents of Sage and Romance' by Patricia Wedel.. and every time when it comes to Autumn, often times, it reminds me some good ol' moments; the memories of ol' passing seasons...

... each stanza talks to a reader here. beautiful art.

[Dara]

There is something about autumn that grabs me. I think part of is having lived in the north for so many years we hung onto those last semi mild temperatures and brilliant fall colors to ward off the thought of impending long cold winters. It is wonderful to see you here. Thank you so much.

[Einstein Noodle]

well done Dara! well done indeed ... there is a strong gentleness ... a life well lived bringing fruits of contentment and peace that screams out in your poem ... very relateable .. sound deep wisdom .. easy flowing read .. love the repetition as each time i sense that "place" .. font, color and form are instantly enticing says i!
E.

[Dara]

Hello my dear friend! Great to see you and to receive this wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed it. Now the question is when do we enter the stage of ‘winter’? I for one hope to hold off for a long time. My grandmother lived to be 102, yikes!! Anyway, I hope you and your family are staying safe throughout this pandemic. Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. You always bring a smile to my face. :-D

[Einstein Noodle]

we are all well Dara .. thank you .. on me Ma's side we had 3 octinagerians alive and well at the same time .. 100, 102 and 109 ... all passed over now .. but how dear they remain to us ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I love the allegory here....we reach our autumn and realize so many things we could have done better, so many things we could have appreciated more and we learn from all of that to take our future days one at a time. We learn to embrace each hour, each minute on this earth, and understand our winters, springs and summers brought us to this point...an appreciation of we have had and the life we got to live.
Love this poem.
j.

[Dara]

You have summed it up beautifully Jacob. What really wows me is remembering my own parents at the same age. I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. Thank you so much for the read and sharing your thoughts. I hope you are doing well amidst this pandemic. Stay safe!

[emmajoy]

Firstly what a beautifully presented poem, Dara, it draws the reader into it at once.. the colour of the font is true as true, too. As to your words, they are wonderfully sincere and as near a gift that a poet could give. Life should allow people to learn more about themselves and the people they live amongst or even recognise over time. Thank you so very much,, your words are memorable. x

[Dara]

Thank you my friend! My thoughts as I grow older are becoming more nostalgic every day plus there is more time than usual to dwell on them. I am thrilled that you enjoyed my poem. As one who I would consider to be in the ‘spring’ of your life you can still relate and appreciate the thoughts behind it. My goal to “hold onto the autumn of my life” is intense. I have never been as fond of winter so entering that stage will take quite a bit of preparation. ;-) Always wonderful to see you here. Take care dear poet!

[emmajoy]

Can feel the chill in the air of an evening here, so understand how feelings feel the same at time, truly can. Have to say however, some of the most wonderful people i know, are 'walking history' and they are well into the Autums of their livess.. They have those varying colours that life's left them with ~ I truly mean that.
Prepare for your Winter best you can, layer self and home.. Plus, hang cartoons on a wall and magnets with silly quotes on the fridge and ~ make music. (Makes stick up to self to do same!) Anthing to keep you grinning, warm!
Sending warm wishes and many.. keep safe, smiling and more, dear friend,. x

[Dara]

Thank you Emma. Those are excellent suggestions. I love the idea of being “walking history”. I do have quite a few stories to tell my grandchildren when they are older. :-)

[emmajoy]

Remind yourself of those storiesl, Dara, luxuriate in them! Glory in them and when you're all gloried up.. that's the time to share them around.. Go wallow in a life well spent.. erase any grey clouds, only air the goodies :))) Keep warm and safe, luv ,

[emmajoy]

Had to come read again.. sighhhhh..

[Dara]

Awww.... How sweet of you. As it were, today was a beautiful warm autumn day and perfect for reminiscing. Thank you so much for another visit.

[emmajoy]

Today was bright til dull.. life is such a mixture, isn't it, but like hope, the stars are always there, we just have to look that much harder. Hugs.. kluisrsHave

[Dara]

That is so true. There is a saying: “I will love the light for it shows me the way; yet I will love the darkness for it shows me the stars.“
-Augustine “Og” Mandino
On those darker days we can look to the stars for hope. May your day be filled with hope filled moments dear Emma!

[John the Baptist]

A very nice look at acquired wisdom here. In the autumn of life we all hopefully will have gained the ability to view our lives this way. Unfortunately, some don't, and they miss the whole point of coming here in the first place.

[Dara]

Autumn has always been my favorite season so the fact that my life also finds me there is a comfort. Thank you for your kind words. I so appreciate your visit!