A Safe Place to Land

A poem about true love, reposted.

   She spoke to him softly her voice but a whisper.

He was tired but listened with all the strength he could muster.

 

Lean on me, please try to stand

and I will find you a safe place to land.

 

She was a vision of loveliness too good to be true

and he followed her wordlessly he had nothing to lose.

His back ached from carrying the world on his shoulders,

a young man but still, felt his body getting older.

 

You are weary, come take my hand

and I will give you a safe place to land.

 

In the days that followed their feelings grew and grew.

Looking into those brown eyes he suddenly knew.

Her love was all he needed to make his life complete,

 together they would build a home, no more feelings of defeat.

 

Upon her finger he placed a gold band

in hopes of finding a safe place to land.

 

 The years flew by and it wasn’t easy.

They were happy in love but always too busy.

Now they were sheltered and safe in their home,

bound by trust and devotion no need to roam.

 

Their love knew no boundaries, they soared hand in hand

and together had found a safe place to land.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I wrote this poem several years ago for my son and his girlfriend who eventually became his wife and my lovely daughter in law.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

The years flew by and it wasn’t easy. - ' They were happy in love but always too busy. - Now they were sheltered and safe in their home, - bound by trust and devotion no need to roam.'

Such start to finish loveliness in your poem, Dara. You've written a tale of growing love, ups and downs included, with a real understanding of how it can and should be. You've really said it all, luv. Thank you so much for you kindess and wisdom. xx

[Dara]

As always your words bring a smile to my face :-) It is great to see you here and I am delighted that you enjoyed reading my little love story. Their nest now includes a lively three year so I would say they have gone full circle. I hope life is treating you well my friend. You represent the best of us and deserve as much!

[emmajoy]

There's nothing better than reading beautiful poetry or exchanging with special friends, Dara. :)

[Dara]

So true! It feeds the soul and sharing brings us all closer together. Often times will turn my ‘gray skies blue’.

[emmajoy]

And that needs be your next title!!! x

[Dara]

Hmmmm... good idea! :-)

[emmajoy]

I don't charge for advice, Dara!!!! Hugs. :)

[Dara]

:-))))) 🤗

[Einstein Noodle]

awwww i love a good love story ... one that holds to an "old fashioned" idea that commitment counts .. that rubbing rough edges off..makes for smooth sailing ... so quickly ... too many drop the ball as soon as they are confronted with an obstacle ... :( i read your author's note and am doubly happy for all of you ... living life and giving each other a ...................................... ;)
E.
ps. especially like the change with the gold band in your repeating lines ... wonderful poem to read ... makes me happy .. and nice new avatar Dara!! i see you

[Dara]

And it makes me happy to have you pay a visit, my friend. Thank you very much for your wonderful comments! Sure made my day. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. Yes, there is nothing like “an old fashion love song” :-) Take care!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we can gain strength and sustenance from love....but also that feeling of being complete...
when two people who can survive on their own just fine get together...the strength of two as one is unstoppable.
j.

[Dara]

Yes it is and you have summed it up so beautifully. In my son's case he and his wife have already weathered many a storm and are an inspiration to me. Thank you for this lovely review.