Reflecting on the lingering presence of a loved one after they are gone. I had posted it earlier using a different title but decided to make a few changes.
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Beautifully penned Dara, reminds me a lot of Elizabeth's Fraye's equally touching, heart-rendering poem ' Do not stand at my grave and weep' ....
Do not stand at my grave and weep
I am not there. I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow.
I am the diamond glints on snow.
I am the sunlight on ripened grain.
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning's hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circled flight.
I am the soft stars that shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry;
I am not there. I did not die.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
My cup runeth over. Your warm review and comparison to Elizabeth Fraye touched me deeply. Her poem i.. read moreMy cup runeth over. Your warm review and comparison to Elizabeth Fraye touched me deeply. Her poem is just so tender and beautiful. Thank you so much for visiting and your words!
Beautifully penned Dara, reminds me a lot of Elizabeth's Fraye's equally touching, heart-rendering poem ' Do not stand at my grave and weep' ....
Do not stand at my grave and weep
I am not there. I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow.
I am the diamond glints on snow.
I am the sunlight on ripened grain.
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning's hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circled flight.
I am the soft stars that shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry;
I am not there. I did not die.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
My cup runeth over. Your warm review and comparison to Elizabeth Fraye touched me deeply. Her poem i.. read moreMy cup runeth over. Your warm review and comparison to Elizabeth Fraye touched me deeply. Her poem is just so tender and beautiful. Thank you so much for visiting and your words!
Very nicely written Dara, oh what a heart telling piece you have written straight from the heart. It has a different perspective from the one that has departed.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much Robert. It is nice to think that something of them lingers for awhile anyway after.. read moreThank you so much Robert. It is nice to think that something of them lingers for awhile anyway after they leave us. I am so pleased that you picked up on the different perspective. Great to see you here as always!
Yes, unknown to our flesh and blood, but our souls suspect and our dreams reveal that they are still with us.
Another lovely tribute to one much loved, dear poet.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you for this beautiful review and your continued support as I drift through this somewhat diff.. read moreThank you for this beautiful review and your continued support as I drift through this somewhat difficult period. Your words never fail to warm my heart dear Misery.
I am a retired teacher who has just recently discovered the joy of writing poetry. Formerly known as Passion Flower, I decided to publish using my own name. My poetry is simple and from the heart whi.. more..