The Hummingbird

The Hummingbird

A Poem by Dara




From flower to flower


it flits and sips


the nector so sweet


without using lips.

 


© 2018 Dara


Author's Note

Dara
Just a fun ditty about a most fascinating bird!
Photography: Larry Ditto

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Amazing and fascinating birds as you portray so marvelously...:)...............

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dara

7 Years Ago

That they are :-) Many thanks for your uplifting words. I so appreciate your visits!
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome. ....::::)))))
Enjoy the ABCB rhyming scheme while reflecting on this fascinating little fella.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dara

7 Years Ago

That they are! Thank you for taking the time to stop by. So nice to see your words here.
J Manuel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words.
Beautiful! Loved it. The Hummingbird is a beautiful bird and you have shown it in your lines amazingly.
The way they drink, dance everything about these small creatures is wonderful. I wish we were like them, happy and carefree.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dara

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your enthusiastic review. They do spread joy and are so fascinating to watch.😊
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Hummingbirds drink with their tongues by rapidly lapping nectar. Their tongues have tubes which run down their lengths and help the hummingbirds drink the nectar. Great little poetic write highlighting the Hummingbird's 'dance'!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dara

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I love the way you describe their antics as a little dance. They are so much fun .. read more
beautifullllllllllllllll
loved your lines

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dara

7 Years Ago

I am so happy you enjoyed my little ditty. So nice to see you here!
APOORVA

7 Years Ago

i didn't only enjoy, i loved it
A tiny bird that dances like Ginger Rogers in high heels and backwards...
a rare beauty.... truly, Pat

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Dara

7 Years Ago

They most certainly do. Great comparison Patricia. Thank you so much for stopping by.
Lovely words and picture. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dara

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much. They are very fascinating creatures.
Very funny. The poor bird can get the nectar he needs but can't kiss his mate.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dara

7 Years Ago

Ah, I hadn't thought of it like that but you are spot on :-) Thank you so much.
lovely imagery in this rhyming brevity!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dara

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. They are beautiful creatures.
A beautiful image, and a very sweet poem. I love hummingbirds!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dara

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I love them too. They are so fascinating.
Kerunai

8 Years Ago

Yes they are. Only birds I know of that can nearly disappear before your eyes.

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Added on July 31, 2015
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Dara
Dara

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I am a retired teacher who has just recently discovered the joy of writing poetry. Formerly known as Passion Flower, I decided to publish using my own name. My poetry is simple and from the heart whi.. more..

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