The world will crumble, and you will stand, and you will cling to your good man.
Well-written and well-formatted, dear Dara.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you dear friend for this sweet review. It is so good to see your words gracing my page. As alw.. read moreThank you dear friend for this sweet review. It is so good to see your words gracing my page. As always they warm my heart.
that was a great song, but this poem stands well on its own...
your phrasing is exquisite...we feel how she is drawn to him.
nicely done.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Your words of praise mean so much coming from you Jacob. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem and thank .. read moreYour words of praise mean so much coming from you Jacob. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem and thank you for taking the time for this wonderful review.
What a lovely written piece here Dara. So heart telling of the person that you love to read and that means so much to you.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
So many wonderful poets here, so little time :-) Yes, poetry has the power to reach the heart like .. read moreSo many wonderful poets here, so little time :-) Yes, poetry has the power to reach the heart like no other. Thank you for your read and sweet review.
~It's amazing how we can often be so entranced in a song that its intended meaning slips by unnoticed. At least, that's what happened to me until I found out the true meaning of the metaphors and the fact that it's about an affair. (duh) haha She will be missed. Great poem. ~
Yes, sometimes I get lost in the melody and miss some of the words but this one touched me in a pers.. read moreYes, sometimes I get lost in the melody and miss some of the words but this one touched me in a personal way. Thank you so much for your wonderful review and comments.
9 Years Ago
FYI he was single ;-)
9 Years Ago
haha, that's a very important clarification you know. Thanks for telling me/us. :)
saw the title and could not miss your poem .. Pheobe is sorely missed by those who love her works .. i can not say how many times i listened to Poetry Man .. sighhhh!
your poem could not be better ... start to finish .. your chosen words, rhythm and rhyme .. i find all just perfect .. into my library it goes .. well done says i!
E.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Oh my, I am just so honored that you have added this to your library. Your words warm my heart. You .. read moreOh my, I am just so honored that you have added this to your library. Your words warm my heart. You can think of this as you pen your beautiful, romantic poetry and the female hearts that you touch with each line :-)
I'd forgotten about this great Phoebe Snow song, and kept thinking "Guitar Man" by, I think--David Gates. As always, your writing is wonderful.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much Sam. Yes, it is a great song and one I only came across again recently in one of m.. read moreThank you so much Sam. Yes, it is a great song and one I only came across again recently in one of my 'flashback' moments. :-)
When words move our soul inside, we are left with desires to embrace the author. :D
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Most definitely Moonskittles. Words can have a powerful effect on our emotions. Thank you so much f.. read moreMost definitely Moonskittles. Words can have a powerful effect on our emotions. Thank you so much for your kind review.
I am a retired teacher who has just recently discovered the joy of writing poetry. Formerly known as Passion Flower, I decided to publish using my own name. My poetry is simple and from the heart whi.. more..