Lost in the Moment

In her mind she saw them

walking on the sand

their faces reflecting the setting sun

touching fingers, holding hands.

She would gently lean against him

her cheek resting on his chest

and  with baited breath

her body would ache

for the touch of his sweet caress.

She would raise her head

and he’d softly kiss her

their hearts  beating fast

both lost in the moment

wishing it would last.

Reviews

[....................]

life is all about moments and you have captured this one beautifully... a gorgeous picture too...

[Dara]

Thank you for this wonderful comment. If only some moments would last longer....

[....................]

I agree, Dara... but for me, the moments that have counted, are kept safely in my heart and I take them out when I need them :D

[Dara]

Like a chest full of treasures to be viewed again and again, that is lovely!

[....................]

Indeed.... :D

[Einstein Noodle]

i feel serene and warm reading your poem .. very clever .. making use of the pic as an integral part of the story .. leaves me with an ending of my own choosing .. could be someone dreaming of the love of their own .. or lamenting the loss of one .. or both together ;) very smooth .. the language is simple an eloquent .. enjoyed reading
E.

[Dara]

Thank you for stopping by and having a read. I took that picture one evening and the poem was born from it, that and past experience :-) So lovely to have met you!

[Einstein Noodle]

same here Dara!

[Robert]

This was a lovely write Dara, very tender and touching. A soft and smooth flowing poem but loud and clear of the longing for that person.

[Dara]

Thank you for this wonderful review Robert. I was definitely feeling the longing for a lost loved one when I wrote it. I am so happy you enjoyed it!

[Samuel Dickens]

Very sweet and romantic, with the last line adding a bit of sad realism to the scene. There are some wonderful things in life that we hope will last forever, like strolling on the beach with your love, but sometimes there's an attached expiration date. Savoring the moment is best, methinks.

[Dara]

You are so right. Maya Angelou touched on this when she said "Life isn't measured by the breaths we take but the moments that take our breath away." Thank you for this wonderful review.