Between Castle Dawson and ToomeBridge
A Poem by
John Alexander McFadyen
Where Heaney was conceved
The gun rests between
my finger and my thumb,
ink leaking from the nib
as blood is pumped
to my cortex.
I smell the peat
from the bogside
as my father’s digging
invades my mind.
He slurps milk
from the cow’s tits
to slake his thirst
for freedom.
The boots of oppression
stomp upon the corpses
of true men
killing life itself.
And I, I write
my frustration
in stanzas full
of hate.
15/10/23
© 2023 John Alexander McFadyen
Reviews
I've found a theme, and it, and your writing are dear to me. Tiocfaidh ár lá
Posted 10 Months Ago
8 Months Ago
Indeed, Beidh an lá linn. Many thanks.
The Irish poet and Nobel Prize winner would be honored by this. Well done.
Posted 1 Year Ago
The Irish poet and Nobel Prize winner would be honored by this. Well done.
1 Year Ago
Now that would be an honour I do not deserve but many thanks yous FG.
dear John... there is too much Hate in this World... but still we find Love in all the Countries as "Time goes By". It is Tragic to witness the destruction of Wars. softly, Pat
Posted 1 Year Ago
dear John... there is too much Hate in this World... but still we find Love in all the Countries as "Time goes By". It is Tragic to witness the destruction of Wars. softly, Pat
1 Year Ago
Indeed true Pat. many thank yous. Ireland sits in my heart and the troubles I remember well.
This was intense and powerful; not sure of the hidden message, but I like it.
Posted 1 Year Ago
This was intense and powerful; not sure of the hidden message, but I like it.
1 Year Ago
Thank you Sami. Nothing hidden it speaks of the British occupation of Ireland.
1 Year Ago
Ok. I see. You are welcome sir.
This rings out in the grand tradition of Seamus reminding himself and us of his father. Nicely done.
Winston
Posted 1 Year Ago
This rings out in the grand tradition of Seamus reminding himself and us of his father. Nicely done.
Winston
1 Year Ago
My favourite poet. Many thanks Winston.
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John Alexander McFadyen Brixworth, England, United Kingdom
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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools..
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