This is the best poem I've read by you . . . admittedly, I haven't read you that much . . . but this one really stands out. I love the light loving touch with a ton of unique sparkling details. Anyone would be honored & delighted to be the object of this poem (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
love it ... well done says i ... lines flow smoothly as the images and scene unfold .. all wrapped in the eyes of love ... so very much takes me back to my hippie days ;) she a rare beauty, John ...this one you have painted here ..:)
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John, this poem...this is a jewel! ... i've never seen such lovely images in a poem (and such lines) that can almost get well tasted, smelled and touched. I humble hug you in truly a gesture of admiration. sincerely, Amber.
*ratings and numbers here are merely routine: this amazing writer needs none of them.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Thank you Amber for such a kind review, I am humbled.
Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..