Dining Out

Dining Out

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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Inspired by Jacobs poem 'Dining In' and a tryst I observed while out for a walk in the country today.

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Text messages

leaking in covert

word chains.

 

Distractions,

eyes left

of the centre,

 

as the band

of gold is tarnished

by the dirty hands

of desire.

 

Covert encounters

in lay-bys,

down farm tracks,

by the sea shore,

 

as mother stays home,

lays the table

to feed the kids

and a father

thinks his wife

is enjoying her

poetry reading.

 

18/11/20

© 2020 John Alexander McFadyen


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John Alexander McFadyen

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The movement of life. Do we know what others do? Nice flow of statements led the readers to more questions. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote


Posted 4 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Indeed we often live life in blissful ignorance Coyote John; many thank yous!
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

I agree John and you are welcome.
Observing a tryst while out walking in the country??? I sure hope you were birdwatching...and actual birds, at that! I have no time for those that cheat and give in to base desires over respect for wife/husband and family. They deserve all the pain they get. And no woman sits at home reading poetry! Ha! 💛

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Yes they were in seperate cars parked off the road and the windows were steamed up. Not the first ti.. read more
I love it, when one person is messing around on the other, yet thinks that the partner is so true blue.

Good for her.

Bad for the kids.

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

More that both in the tryst have partners and responsibilities methinks Jacob. Many thanks for setti.. read more

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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