Ravings

Make what you will of it!

Ravings

Lets not see

the error of our ways,

random thinking

as plagiarism

goes commando.

Acorn eating squirrels,

squirrels eating acorns,

reversed polarity

as the battery acid weeps

and the tears of a clown

burn in necrotising fasciitis,

eating away

at the bereft conscience

of world order,

with only psychopathy

for company.

Climate change

doesn't work in these parts.

 

27/09/17

Reviews

[wordman]

many changes in our society john,but we still hold to our roots

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I guess so Ron but many also have their heads buried in the sand. Many thanks.

[The Seeker of Thoughts]

Speaking from the experience of being part of this new modern world. Everything is becoming the same and everything new is just something old getting repainted. I hate it how we are so plain in our thinking. We claim to not need books for google can find it. We don't need our friend to make moments when a picture will do. We are fools. Yet, we will learn. For the best teacher of the fool is experience. Thank you for this amazing work.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I hope you are not too cynical. There is still optimism as so many people want to retain the human side of social life and also want to see society healthy and socially focussed upon the greater good. That is what we, the young and older must fight for. Many thanks for the review and positive feedback TSOT

[The Seeker of Thoughts]

It is my pleasure and no I am not that cynical friend, I assure you.

[Coyote Poetry]

In the world of cell phone and not reading. Most kids don't know. Sometimes more than one answer. New world don't know. Everything cost something. Powerful and useful words made me think tonight. Thank you John for sharing your amazing poetry and words.
Coyote

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes the modern world is producing people easily influenced and who are supersaturated in celebrity and wealth. Thanks Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right and this is very sad. Better to be who you want to be. Not a copy.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we have put ourselves in such a bad position with our thinking-----we have started to be apathetic enough to copy others' thinking....and our tears are really hurting---but we cannot blame those before us---we have to accept responsibility.....we put our own make-up on in the end.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed Jacob. Celebrity and wealth acquisition are the mantra, fueled by social media and by way of dog eat dog, dog infiltrate or invade someone else's country. Nice society, nice world.

[Tony Jordan]

Climate change - gangrenous world order and nutz - makes me wonder if the POTUS isn't an overbearing thought in your mind this morning John.
Some really tasty tidbits throughout this one.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I see the connection old boy but he was the furthest from my mind in these random thoughts as part of a free association I did after your recent post. Cheers fella for the inspiration.

[Tony Jordan]

Honoured to be an inspiration - thank you mate.