Fey, Fay and Faint

A beautiful thing love!

Fey, Fay and Faint

I long to feel the beat

of your beautiful heart,

encased in your sweet

and delicate chest,

as I cup your breasts

in giving hands.

The very heart that fuelled

the thoughts you've penned

that penetrated my soul

and stole my very freedom;

left me a prisoner

to your desires.

I yearn to smell the fragrance

of your hair, your skin

and the piquancy

of your arousal

as I hold you to me;

recalling all the words

that we have shared,

the hopes and dreams

that have burned

and endured,

and endured,

and endured,

and that have kept us so alive

for oh so many misty,

tear drenched moons.

14/09/17

Reviews

[wordman]

love,it brings the best out of us ,loved the write

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Ron

[Mayistone]

that penetrated my soul
and stole my very freedom;
left me a prisoner...So deep!!! l like it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Mayistone.

[Mayistone]

You are welcome John!

[Coyote Poetry]

Proper use of words and thoughts. Allowed the reader to feel and understand the pleasure of happy hands on perfect women. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Coyote for reading and the generous comment.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh to be in love forever ....sigh! ;) well said ..especially like the endured line repeated ...it is powerful to me ...and i think i read it just the way you would want it ... i appreciate the gentleness throughout and i also like that it is she that has penetrated .... his heart ... i think that is very suave and clever sir!
E.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you dear 'E' for appreciating this one.

[Tony Jordan]

I like the word choice here John. The desirous feel is really well conveyed. The end flourish is a masterclass in ending a poem.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you kindly Tony! Is it still raining lol?

[Tony Jordan]

There's a strange orange disc in the sky John. Im frightened...lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha you p***y!

[Tony Jordan]

meeeow - lmao