Secrets

Sometimes we meet people who affect us fundamentally but whom we cannot have.

Secrets

You lay breathless still

in the shadow of shadows

dripping with desire.

 

25/08/17

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words. You made the reader believe every word. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

a perfect haiku john,wonderful job

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Ron, glad you enjoyed it.

[Tony Jordan]

Timing John - was the arrow that killed this particular C**k Robin and that's a hard thing to have to admit.
I truly relate to this as 'that which we only really know when we experience it.'

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeedio Tony, you hit the victim on the head. Thanks old buddy lol!

[AYVID N]

Such a beautiful thought John. A matter of perspective.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed sweet poetess. Many thank yous.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome