Angler

Angler

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

The games some women play.

"

Angler

Even brackish water

is see through

if one has patience and

looks hard enough.

If you ripple the surface

the reflected light

will dazzle,

preventing any

meaningful examination.

Patience, aye there's the rub.

I see you play me,

as a master angler

plays the catch

before releasing it

back to the wild.

I feel you tease

out the line,

just far enough

to allow the bait

to be tantalisingly

displayed.

Then you cut it

with your sharpened blade

when the fish has bitten.

 

04/04/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen


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Sometimes baits are required to keep life interesting don't you agree :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

7 Years Ago

Ah but only if you are out fishing. many thanks Ria
Like the common cold the bait continuously transforms from line to line so (unless we take the vow of chastity) we are always getting caught, hook, line, etc., etc.
Nice metaphoricals you have there John.
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

7 Years Ago

Cheers Tony. Metaphoricals are good!
There's a lot of truth in this one.

Clever poem. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

7 Years Ago

Many thanks Relic.,

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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