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Do Not

Do Not

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

People often think they know best!

"

Do Not

Do not stand in my way

for the gods will surely disown you

for such a sin,

and cast you into darkness.

And there you will remain

in perpetuity.

Do not frustrate this love

or belittle its cause,

for in it there is truth

despite my insanity.

And my delusions

are merely our Folie à deux.

Do not mock my affliction

for it is indeed a poison,

seeping green bile through my veins,

to temper my heart.

And the serpent's bite

is still strong and free.

Do not take me for the fool

in this 'Twelfth Night'

for I will entertain the audience

and have the last laugh.

Whilst you are simply

the butt of their mirth.

 

28/06/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen


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shakespeare with a BITE... lol
So strong and reads like a warning... do not mistake my kindness for weakness!
Love this John! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

You read it well Sereena. Many thank yous!
sereenaoutloud

9 Years Ago

yeh i got it right ...lol sometimes i see something that is totally not there lol ! :)
You a.. read more
Heavy are the words in this write John Le Carre I mean John Gabriel :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Ha you vagabond! I used to love reading Le Carre but he was far more eloquent and complex in his wri.. read more
andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

I found him so condensed in every paragraph he wrote if I got sleepy I lost the plot lol
and yet another play ready for the stage

Posted 9 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Thank you for such kindness WM.
Now it makes since as I did note on today's work there was a feel of early english style. And seeing Shakespeare last night I see is your inspiration. Very well done my friend. Thanks,

Posted 9 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Many thanks Willard.
love how you used shakespeare in allusion for this piece...others tell us, dare not go there...but our heart will only listen to itself...and if it is self-destruction awaiting, so be it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Ha to confess I went to a live performance of Twelfth Night yesterday evening and found it so inspir.. read more

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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