The Look Of Love

The eyes have it!

The Look Of Love

Smiling eyes so deep,

brown orbs into which I fall

so, so willingly.

 

14/06/15

Author's Note

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Thank you for not honoring blue eyes! No offense meant for all other colors, but brown eyes are so underrated when it comes to creative writing. As if they're any less profound.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed they are not and in fact they radiate that deep warm chocolate look into which one must fall. Thank you Nadia.

[sereenaoutloud]

Love this .,.. finally a shout out to all us brown orbs ...LOL
No seriously beautiful write and so true how much power that one look can hold!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I have only had one partner with blue eyes; all the rest have been hazel or brown. Brown are deep and comforting. Many thanks Sereena.

[andrew mitchell]

Fantastic write captured so well

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Andrew.

[wordman]

just one look
is all it took

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah yes.....................cheers WM!

[Willard Wells]

Beautiful and man becomes a complete fool just with a look or glance. Very nicely done sir.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Willard and I own up to being that fool.

[fattycbreezy52]

wow,i loved the comparison with orbs and that also brown.I have always adored brown eyes since it's the colour of my eyeballs too.And reminds me of the latin influence on english-"ocular globe" for eyes;D
Such a beautiful description of the way she looks at him with those brown.Yes,the eyes have it.Sounds like some vital things are written there.Eyes act as the main source of communication in love,they say.
I loved it:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Exactly FCB. Sparkling eyes and a lovely smile so captivating. Thank you.