Kiss

Perfect passion.

Kiss

You offer your lips

in such joyous surrender,

succulent and sweet.

 

10/06/15

Author's Note

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

It's a sweet feeling when your Dulcinea is desirous of offering such intimate act as that of lips embracing each other. Lovely poem!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed and kissing is so underrated. Many thanks Nadia.

[Robert]

The kiss, sweet and memorable.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed, thank you Robert.

[sereenaoutloud]

Oh the perfect kiss can speak volumes!! Very nicely expressed John! And again love the song! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh the perfect kiss!................nothing like it and the closeness it brings. Thank you Sereena!

[sereenaoutloud]

your are welcome...im finally getting all caught up on the RR's...!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Having been a way a few days I am just about to start lol!

[sereenaoutloud]

oh i wish you luck then ..lol

[R Smith]

a nicely summed up kiss John, a true pleasure of life :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed Richard. Thank you.

[AaronFreitas]

Where can I find a woman like that! haha nice wording :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

In your poetry dear man, in your poetry lol. Thanks Aaron

[~]

There is nothing else that says so much about someone's heart without speaking one word -- a true kiss of selfless adoration. :D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Your words remind me of the old song 'it's in His Kiss' by Betty Everett. Better known as the Shoop Shoop Song and later well 'covered' by Cher. Thank you MS

[~]

off to check it out :D

[andrew mitchell]

Brilliant hopefully she doesn't have chilli on her lips!! ouch! As a joke at work we rubbed a chilli on the rims of the staff mugs at work lol as a joke!! Things got heated. Clever stuff John.

[fattycbreezy52]

Aha.this gives me an imagery of tasting a fruit.To be precise, a bunch of succulent grapes.Amazing work,yet again John:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you for such a kind review FCB. Hope the grapes are sweet.

[wordman]

a sweet write john and great music

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you WM. I love Norah Jones singing and even though I dislike 'covers' this is an exception as she does not try to be Elvis and puts her own interpretation on it.

[wordman]

yeah,i like her too

[Kelly Scheppers]

You have the "senryu" wrapped around your little finger, and my heart...breathless, as always!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are so sweet Kelly. Many. many thank yous!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I thought I was going to hear "Prince" instead of lovely Nora!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No making love to Prince or Norah.....no competition!