The Earth Quaked (Lainey V)

The Earth Quaked (Lainey V)

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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When we are stricken.............

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The Earth Quaked (Lainey V)

You are now my dream,

both in consciousness

and in the depth of my

Freudian sleep.

I see you and read

your desires like a map

that I need to follow.

I heard your voice

and it soothed me

but caused my ardour

to glow with the heat

and the fire of lust.

Such a beautiful wanting

that I never wish

for it to end.

I look at your photographs

and see such a sensuous smile

that I would kiss

until every orgasm

you have ever felt

was overwhelmed

by the tsunami

of our love.

 

02/01/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen


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So warm and full of poetic emotion. Gorgeous

Posted 9 Years Ago


A beautiful, romantic, and sensual verse, as you leave your heart open on the page again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Still examine that dream I see. Passionate work John.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"...in the depth of my
Freudian sleep"

Wow, love that line! You are missed, John...please come back!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brilliantly romantic. So now all I want to know is, when will you and Lainey meet? I wish you love! Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was a journey well worth the taking. A very romantic series John.
I hope that Lainey, where ever she is, reads these and comes running. Perhaps she already has.

Posted 10 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kindness Ana. I am going running to her. A man should make the effort for love.
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

That's so great John! :)

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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