Fall With Me.

Together.

Fall With Me

So let me slip beneath

the warm waters of hope

where my skin will bathe

in beliefs that

I have never dared

to contemplate.

Let me swim naked

to places where you

have trusted no one

and no one has

understood the melody

you play.

There let me release you,

undress you in the sun,

until you stand before me

stripped of all inhibition,

and filled to the very brim

with desire.

 

26/12/14

Author's Note

Reviews

[ANTO]

This was so gentle John. The love in it is wonderful. The trust and the respect too. All very indicative of a good heart and sharp mind. Bravo

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Anto!

[Kelly Scheppers]

This reads so beautifully. I've never imagined myself "being undressed in the sun" ...but I like it!

I was never into Elvis. I fell for the sexpot from Wales, the guy with the pipes, who was actually a friend of Elvis'...Sir Tom Jones! He's 74 now, but you'd never know it!

You're always such a delight to read, John. And you're inspiring, as well. Hope the new year is good to you!

My best,
Kelly

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Kelly for such a lovely review. I find the sun an aphrodisiac And making love outdoors in the warmth of the sun is like bathing in warm water only better!

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Quite beautiful... Wanting to share the deepest parts of another, stripping bare all inhibitions and layers to know the true soul and heart ... Very lovely indeed.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank yoy Kalypso

[willweb]

This will capture a few hearts. The beauty of your words are calming and deeply touching. She will smile for sure.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

If only Will. Thanks.

[Laura Lynn]

this reminds me of going swimming in the summertime, what a handsome man Elvis was! so many memories what a beautiful smile he's got! That's nothing to take lightly,

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Such a nostalgic interpretation Laura. Thank you,