Safe Love.

Safe Love

Turn my skin

into a raging volcano.

Raise me to the heights

of your satisfaction,

the place where desire meets

all of your deepest dreams.

Where I may penetrate

the you who holds

on to belief in fairy tales.

The stories your mother

told you abed as she soothed

your naïve aspirations.

The place you have longed

to feel safe.

 

11/12/14

Author's Note

Reviews

[The Black Warrior]

This is wonderfully done

Where I may penetrate

the you who holds

on to belief in fairy tales.

^^ Very interesting lines :D
I like the song as well! :D thank you for sharing :)))

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Suk.

[The Black Warrior]

You are very welcome! :D

[Lyn Anderson]

Safe inside the volcano. Hmmm, a nice place to be.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No tis raising the desire in another to a volcanic level so that they focus and dedicate themeselves to the other's happiness. Thanks 'M'

[Lydia Shutter]

When all masks and costumes are thrown away, when all doubts and worries have vanished, that is when love can truly blossom. It is the wise man (or woman) who knows this. Well written, John. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Lydi, wise woman!

[willweb]

I don't know why but kind of reminds me of GNR's Sweet child o' mine. Love, it is all over your writing John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Just a hopeless (the operative word!) romantic. Passion in all things. Thanks Will.

[Layi Tate]

Wow.... short yet powerful !

I enjoyed this poem .

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Layi for indulging me so.

[Ruth]

This made me tearful...to feel safe and cherished...wow...John, this is perfect wording and rolls over the tongue like honey...superb xo

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you dear Poppy.