Vampiric Lust

Vampiric Lust

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

Vampiric lust

Poetesses fall from love to hate

in the blink of an eye,

in a single lung filling breath,

at the merest intrusion

into their ink laden thoughts.

Emotions laid bare

by bitter reminiscence,

raw nerves,

so deep in their souls

that they lie buried there forever;

bursting forth like vampires

hot for  bloody revenge

and ready to tear

the flesh from the carcass of man.

So fragile the female psyche

that we must tip toe

over the crypt where they lay in wait,

hot and bothered

in the heat of August.

 

14/08/14

© 2014 John Alexander McFadyen


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You are dripping with sarcasm!! You are married right?? So i guess your wife doesn't dig her canines into your veins after reading this.. well! ! I am a branded man- hater.. So i must say you guys deserved to be punished.. serves you right.. :p.. we are a beautiful species and both man and woman amalgate giving the beautiful creation.. cheers to being sarcastic.. lolz

~Sophy

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

HA I caught this on live feed, and I can't help but laugh my arse off!! haha
Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

Lolz... glad could make you laugh out loud.. ha! ;)
John Alexander McFadyen

10 Years Ago

And to think I missed this! Not married but had my blood sucked (and my pocket picked) by many a va.. read more



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I BEG YOUR PARDON!!! You will pay for this one dearheart. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

LMAO!!! I agree!!!
John Alexander McFadyen

10 Years Ago

OMG a two some. I think I can see you both off!
LMAO.... hot and bothered?.... that we are... I don't know about the rest of it.. but hey..
we do lay those emotions bare for the world to see... cute sir.... very cute...

Posted 10 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

10 Years Ago

Thanks April

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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