Vampiric Lust

Vampiric lust

Poetesses fall from love to hate

in the blink of an eye,

in a single lung filling breath,

at the merest intrusion

into their ink laden thoughts.

Emotions laid bare

by bitter reminiscence,

raw nerves,

so deep in their souls

that they lie buried there forever;

bursting forth like vampires

hot for  bloody revenge

and ready to tear

the flesh from the carcass of man.

So fragile the female psyche

that we must tip toe

over the crypt where they lay in wait,

hot and bothered

in the heat of August.

 

14/08/14

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

You are dripping with sarcasm!! You are married right?? So i guess your wife doesn't dig her canines into your veins after reading this.. well! ! I am a branded man- hater.. So i must say you guys deserved to be punished.. serves you right.. :p.. we are a beautiful species and both man and woman amalgate giving the beautiful creation.. cheers to being sarcastic.. lolz

~Sophy

[Frieda P]

HA I caught this on live feed, and I can't help but laugh my arse off!! haha

[Sophy Freebirds]

Lolz... glad could make you laugh out loud.. ha! ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And to think I missed this! Not married but had my blood sucked (and my pocket picked) by many a vampiress lol

[Ruth]

The pasts of others is always hard when we love them...this has such power xo

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Poppy. Did you read some of my Archangel Gabriel page writes? Not The Archangel Gabriel he is an imposter just Archangel Gabriel.

[Ruth]

Not sure I did hon, are they here?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No the author name is Archangel Gabriel on another profile page. Tis my alter ego rant page lol

[Ruth]

ohhh lol Then I shall look...or send me a request?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha forgot my log in. here is one which will get you there, noit the best though:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/strengthofGod/1285901/

[Ruth]

On my way...

[MAC]

oh my John, and i thought i was an overachiever at ticking people off LOl

off kidding aside tis a very well written poem!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Mark! I think?

[MAC]

LOL not sure either

[DJ]

Loved it,well done.
Certainly glad I don't know anyone that fits the bill!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Cheers DJ.

[Dilan Gunawardana]

'So fragile the female psyche
that we must tip toe
over the crypt where they lay in wait,
hot and bothered
in the heat of August.'

I love this part in particular John, the last lines bring it all back to the human world in a very tongue in cheek kind of way :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Dilan

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too, the theme one that does well, the images strong.
(the picture reminded me of my wife, yesteday I wrote poetry instead of doing the washing-up...)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Made me chortle Leslie. Boy do you like living on the edge. Many thank yous.

[Lily Mae]

There is no power greater then that of a woman.. We take men to this place at times with no remorse and then some are just the opposite. Still we feed like vampires either way. We are a beautiful yet strange breed..xo ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I know yet we can't live without you and don't wish too lol!!
Thanks Lily!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Sounds like me BEFORE I have my morning coffee! I'm really as sweet as a peach...

You rock, John!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha, ha remind me to stay away fropm you before your first hit of the day then Kelly! Many thanks for the review.

[R Smith]

Remind me to give your castle in Transylvania a miss John, I found this one a great read but actually scary too, its good when someone can stir that emotion with a poem, brilliant work John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey be careful the vampires are on the rise!

[Lyn Anderson]

HA! Your views on women echo mine on men. I shall have to think up a rebuttal. And it should be LIE in wait, third line from the bottom

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Go f^CK yourself dear heart!

[Lyn Anderson]

I hope that was you being a smart a*s, or you are really in a snit.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You will know the answer....................

[Lyn Anderson]

That sounds ominous.