Giving

Giving

And should you let me

kiss your luscious lips

then I would die

pressed into

your sweet breasts.

That I could taste

every whetted entreat you offer

would be divine;

and then I would be

in surrender

of your blatant satisfaction.

I would pledge my body

and my soul

to every dream

you have been guilty of,

and would impale you

deep upon the blade

of your ultimate desires.

 

10/08/14

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too, this has an almost metaphysical touch, could be a love poem from Donne, good one.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Praise indeed Leslie, just grateful you enjoyed it. Many thanks.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm absolutely certain I'm not the first woman to tell you this, but you are just too much! Another arrow shot straight for the heart...your aim is true!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not sure that is true. Just enjoy writing and if others like it I am doubly blessed. Thank you Kelly for your kindness and support.

[Lyn Anderson]

You and your impaling, but you do it so craftily, doesn't seem like it would hurt.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh trust me it hurts! Thank you 'M'

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha. Only you. One of a kind, you are.

[Ruth]

Oh, good heavens...this is top notch, full throttle :) x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nuff said Poppy, many thanks!

[Aethereal]

This poem gives me the psychological notion that the older some people get the more they’re influenced by natural urges evoked through subconscious acts of childhood regression. The mother-child bond is a strong one that often develops into psychic euphemistic incarnations later on. Everyone wants to feel well, as well as they felt as children under the care of their mothers.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Jeeze just call me randy why don't you lol! Psychotherapy rules!

[Aethereal]

Forgive us Cupid, for us mortals know not what we do when in pursuit of joy and happiness.

[R Smith]

good one John, thats lost love, true love and lust in one day, remarkable inspiration

[John Alexander McFadyen]

That is poetry Richard. Many thanks!

[AprilRN1210]

lot of "impaling" going on in this one sir... wheeew... that is some giving for sure.. you have such a romantic soul and it shines through in your work... another nice write.. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Missed the repitition in my lust. Now resolved!

[AprilRN1210]

I see that.. sorry, had to tease you... it's allowed right? I would expect no less from you sir... just saying...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are allowed.

[AprilRN1210]

oooooh such formality and abruptness. dang... backing away slowly... taking my silly self away before get popped on the wrist or something... ((hugs)) grumpy

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh you misread the intentions severley am not so sensitive!

[AprilRN1210]

can't hear you grumpy... I am off to frolic with the fireflies and dance with dirty birds drinking Frieda's koolaid:P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So naughty! So bad!!!!

[AprilRN1210]

you did read my warning label, yes?

I admit it freely!!!

[AprilRN1210]

hey wait... I was ignoring you... lol

sneaky!! shame on you:P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I hang my head...................

[AprilRN1210]

pffffft... like I believe THAT... ha! you are grinning and laughing... I see you:P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No you saw me!

[AprilRN1210]

yep.... suuuure did... brownie points for not trying to deny... :)