Lovers Sunset

Lovers Sunset

Between the green dressed earth,

the sea and the sky,

is a place where my dreams were born.

When the day is done

and your toil of soil is ended,

you take a breath,

pick up your quill

and let it’s gentle sighs

spread like light across the pages,

in ethereal words that float

in warm enchantments.

They spill in sparkling stars

and the laughter of angels

bathed in moonbeam rays

and fall into my eyes.

That place,

between the earth the sea and the sky,

is where we met.

Where I saw your naked soul,

where my captivation for your sweet heart

was complete;

where my desire for you grew insatiate.

So now I long to leave the sky behind,

were poets play their timeless games of words.

And I yearn to kiss your lips in tender love

and adoration,

and walk hand in hand with you forever

upon the beaches of this earth.

 

07/08/14

Reviews

[Kayleigh]

John this is gorgeous and a beautiful ode to your love. Very romantic. It is hard to find someone who you love more than life and know that she is the one for you, I am happy for you. lovely.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Kayleigh.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I am utterly captivated by your words, John...

So deep and full of adoration, it's exhilarating to read!...

If a person could touch the heart and soul of another in this way, then miracles truly exist...

Simply superb, my friend!~xoxo~:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Robbie. Every word meant!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's my pleasure, John... :)

[MAC]

John, this is just a well written ode to love that is strong in both content and style of writing. Happy that you have found such a person, finding them is harder than most think and if the right one for the both of you then the rest should be easy. Excellent write!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Mark!

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so sweet and romantic.Truly a touching write John :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

But I AM in love. Thank you!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well good for you it makes for the best poems.You are welcome :)

[Leslie Philibert]

This impresses with big images that transport a personal picture in the last lines, finely spun, fine poem.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Leslie, your words mean so much!

[Lyn Anderson]

A very moving tender romantic piece. A lot of soft and sweet imagery. don't forget its does not have an apostrophe when possessive. ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh you scholar you. Maybe I need lessons! Many thanks 'M'!

[Lyn Anderson]

I am a firm but gentle teacher:)

[Enayet1999]

Brilliant!
Outstanding. I love the way you write
It's soo intriguing

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks Enayet. Not sure we have met previously but many thanks!

[Enayet1999]

We haven't actually. I'm new. May i ask if you can review my prologue. Many thanks!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Will take a peak RRS are good!

[Enayet1999]

Thank you ever so much, will add you!

[Frieda P]

Blissfully gorgeous John, you hit all the sweet spots...'toil of soil' eh?

'where my desire for you grew insatiate' big SIGH....

100 longing beachy kisses

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Mwah!! Someone has to till the earth my Lady.

[Frieda P]

Yes I know....not another word. :) ♥

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I fall in love. What can I say? That's what I do, but once reciprocated I stick like proverbial glue!

[Frieda P]

Must I remind you of what your buddies said? .....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And when did I not follow my heart?.................................................

[Frieda P]

You can be President of the I Never Learn Club this month....I give up........................

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Can I have the badge please......................................?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Which month is it anyways?

[Frieda P]

I'm sticking it to your forehead.........................

[John Alexander McFadyen]

What the badge?!

[Frieda P]

It says 'dangerous mind, keep your distance'....lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So it doesn't say gentle and ardent lover please rehome?

[Frieda P]

Only if you dare to flip it over....