Lovers Sunset

Lovers Sunset

Between the green dressed earth,

the sea and the sky,

is a place where my dreams were born.

When the day is done

and your toil of soil is ended,

you take a breath,

pick up your quill

and let it’s gentle sighs

spread like light across the pages,

in ethereal words that float

in warm enchantments.

They spill in sparkling stars

and the laughter of angels

bathed in moonbeam rays

and fall into my eyes.

That place,

between the earth the sea and the sky,

is where we met.

Where I saw your naked soul,

where my captivation for your sweet heart

was complete;

where my desire for you grew insatiate.

So now I long to leave the sky behind,

were poets play their timeless games of words.

And I yearn to kiss your lips in tender love

and adoration,

and walk hand in hand with you forever

upon the beaches of this earth.

 

07/08/14

Reviews

[SouthSoul]

You bring an awareness of an emotion or feeling i wish i could enjoy.
Thank-you

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks. Perhaps you will soon.

[Lydia Shutter]

You always seem to enchant me with your poetry. The imagery is simply stunning, John. The softness of the romance is captivating. To see someone's "naked soul" is to know you are meant to be with him/her. So very lovely. Truly worthy of many heavy sighs! Never stop writing, my friend. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Lydi, just wish it could be reciprocated!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Tell me honestly, have you ever considered publishing your poetry yourself? John, you really should...I mean everything you write is just as brilliant and beautiful and captivating as the one before. Your articulation and consistency is simply off the charts, and I truly do admire you!

Your muse is deserving of recognition too...my regards!

"That place,
between the earth the sea and the sky,
is where we met.
Where I saw your naked soul,
where my captivation for your sweet heart
was complete..."


I believe we should look into having you bronzed! ; )


My best,
Kelly

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Kelly I am speachless. I really do not know how to react to such a wonderful review except to say I am humbled and very grateful that you see my writing in such a good light. Thank you so very much!
The closest I get to bronzing is the two weeks I have just had in Lanzerote lol!

[Sophy Freebirds]

The vivid imagery of the green earth,the endless blue sky,the vast ocean is striking.. the meeting of you and your soulmate in between this is awesome... the way you've set aside all the most beautiful inspirations of a poet. And holding unto your best muse is beautiful.. "i saw your naked soul" it very well portrays how she opened herself up infront of you.. an excellent Lover's sunset..keep writing amigo.. ;)

~Sophy

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Sophy I willl but try.

[Tate Morgan]

You seem to have a kindly poetic heart .Live on friend it is a rare thing

[Ruth]

Breathtaking once again...your pen flows as smooth as your sentiments! x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am so pleased you liked it Poppy and feel very luck to have feelings I can capture in this way. Thank you so much.

[Matching Socks]

Very beautiful write John.
Almost dreamlike.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Ana.

[R Smith]

this is a beautiful poem that I instantly added to my library every line speaks to my romantic self and that part of me always knows great work when it reads it, amazing thank you John

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Richard you are so kind. Thank you for such a nice review.