I Love You!

I Love You!

I hardly dare breathe

as I stare upon your sleeping face

for fear it is simply a dream,

and if I awake

you will be gone,

as a candle snuffed from flickering life.

I watch the rise and fall

of your perfect breasts,

upon which I long to dwell

in languid satisfactions.

I see sweet exhalation

through such gentle lips,

from which you spill the very moon and stars

upon this your mother earth;

and yet you dance with angels.

Heaven celebrates your being

by sending nature to us all,

by giving us the sun,

by coating the land in verdant hues of green

and painting the sky in azure blue.

And I give thanks for each and every breath

you take,

as if it were my own.

I watch in awe,

longing for sleep to end

and for you to awaken in my life.

I yearn for you to enter my conscious yet again,

to spend another day in your light.

To see the mischief in your smile,

the child-like sense of wonder you hold,

and the hope and joy

you give this tortured world.

04/08/14

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Nothing left to say, April said it all....you are the consummate romantic John, I love the colors of your adoration and the vibrancy of your tenderness...breathless.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you my Lady. Love is vibrant and colourful and filled with sparkling hope. One has to keep believing and following that rainbow!

[Frieda P]

As long as there no unicorns there, I'm game. ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And what have you got against those majestic mythical equestrian beasts?

[Frieda P]

Old rant, I thought you'd remember fookin' unicorns...I'm pretty sure you read it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My Lady I did but there has been so much water under the bridge since then. I will return to refresh my memories. Getting on now you see, memory not what it was lol!

[AprilRN1210]

This lives up to the title for sure! It whispers absolute adoration and affection as he worships his sleeping goddess... How breathtakingly romantic and yet subtle hints of passion and desire sprinkled throughout.. He is captivated by her essence and bewitched by her bright spirit... The overwhelming emotion drips from the pen into your heart and fills it up with such blissful euphoria... Amazing write sir... I am in awe of the gentle, caressing tone and the easy tender flow as you floated me along this enchanting dream of that deep, meaningful, spiritual love... It's those small details that u find so endearing in someone that you cherish that u just want to hold in your memories and is incredibly romantic of you to point that out here. It shows genuine sincere affection... And that u know how to cherish those precious treasures that each unique person has..

[John Alexander McFadyen]

April you are such a wonderful woman to indulge me in such a considered and thoughtful review. Many thank yous!

[AprilRN1210]

Just give what I would want... Honest thoughtful insight and how the author made me feel... You're welcome-- it was my pleasure