You Chose!

You Chose!

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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You chose!

The frozen state of denial has ended

and I cannot stop

the waterfall of tears

at our demise.

I now see the predator

 you hid behind the façade,

I realise your motivation.

The pain that wracks my soul

and leaves my breathing

hampered by such deep and sorry sobs

is so acute.

I feel the salt of these sad days

sting the pale flesh of my cheeks

to leave burning, angry tales.

A sad circumstance

over which I have no control.

You decided this fate for us,

elected to re-engage with

your abuser

and leave my soul to rot.

 

08/08/13

© 2013 John Alexander McFadyen


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This is a mixture of anger but you can tell there is sadness in your words, as there would be. Another strong, powerful piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you Noodles
John, the volume just keeps getting louder and louder. Anger screams from this piece. Very well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jack; a mixture of sad and anger me feels.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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