Pickled

Pickled

When she wasn’t here

the page was empty;

the gap was wide,

the space unfilled.

I found my thoughts drift,

asking how she was,

was she alright?

It never felt the same,

my read requests all done!

So strange,

how much we need her,

Happy Birthday Frieda!

 

02/08/13

Author's Note

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

What a unique birthday poem, I enjoyed!

[Leslie Philibert]

a nice tribute to another poet...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Leslie

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Happy belated birthday my darling x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The beast is back!

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Frieda happy thirtieth

[Frieda P]

Smartest thing I ever heard you say Tate ;-)

Thanks!

[Tate Morgan]

OH to be a kid again.

[KAOlmsted]

xD I love your...um...diplomacy, Frieda ;-)

[Tate Morgan]

Can Frieda come out and Play?

[Baby Ricochet]

Happy birthday Frieda!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Frieda P]

Are we still celebrating? Cheers Baby!

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[Patricia Wedel]

John... Beautiful song and poetry. truly... Pat

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Pat

[redflutterby]

Wonderful tribute to Frieda...good to have her back.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yeah, you too!

[Frieda P]

Indeed you too Red! MWAH!

[Mark]

:) LOL I was thinking this was going to be about being drunk! Very nice statement to a wonderful lady.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha Mark perhaps we should colaborate or 'collobetate' on that one! Many thanks.

[Mark]

it's been so long... next time I imbibe I'll let ya know :P

[Frieda P]

Lol, I was pickled when he wrote it, does that count? ;-)

[Mark]

No it doesnt

[Frieda P]

Party pooper...............

[Archangel Gabriel]

Nice one John for a popular poet!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Gab she is popular indeedy