A Question of Justice Served

A Question of Justice Served

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

A Question of Justice Served

There is a snake in this place

who will slither into your tent

and try to entrance you.

But he is no charmer,

far from it, his quill is poisoned

and he is the slimiest creature

known to man.

Spurned for his pickled overtures

he went on the rampage

taking no prisoners

and butchering all before him,

including a fifteen years old poet,

wise but with virgin innocence.

Should we let this monster roam free

to poison our pens

or condemn him back

to Hades where he belongs?

 

26/06/13

© 2013 John Alexander McFadyen


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This reminds me of an archaic medieval era , when some girl children married at 9 years old to grown adult men, there were plagues galore, good work, John.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sheema
A good write, vengeance is a major theme here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Indeed it is Kiran, many thanks!
I think we should forget about all the bad things and just focus on the good times! We only live once, right? YOLO, ha.

Powerful write, John!

~ Noodle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Whatever. Thanks Sye.
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s y e

11 Years Ago

didnt mean to offend you or anything, btw.
I like when people compete. There's nothing wrong with ruffling a few feathers with your writing. It's not everyones cup of tea. Good write John!

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thanks AHP it has stimulated a few good poems even from Quinfin. His last tilt at me was very vitrio.. read more
John ! As I have told you, you should not use your talent to get involved in fighting other writers ; I don`t know who you mean, but I don`t really want to know.There are so many subjects to write about, don`t get bogged down in things like this, life is too difficult to define things in black and white or right or wrong. A good poem, the wrong subject !

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Hi Leslie, Do you think I really relish being involved in this. I reported what happened to the mode.. read more
Thanks for the RR John. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Your words are strong and command the reader to attention. Not sure who he is but if he is that bad, he deserves to be ignored or "condemned back to Hades where he belongs" :)

Write on please. It is poems like these that make WC interesting. Great piece of writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you Divya. I agree but the moderators seem to have one rule for some and another for others.
AYVID N

11 Years Ago

You are welcome John.
Is justice ever really served s you state here, an intersting point to ponder my love, well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas and I think you are right but when we stop fighting for it then all is lost.
words, all we have are words. Powerful ones you've written here John.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Many thanks as always Mark.
Very nice piece that captures the mood well

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you Gab................
Pickles, posies and poo, I'm with you...not fair I know, such is life it seems!

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Ha thank you Frieda lets just enjoy!

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