Seeing Love

Seeing Love

In my eyes is only you,

a clarity of sight

that triumphs over all.

History has died

and is not mourned.

My vision bright,

you’ve lit the fire at my core.

I see you,

whole,

complete,

magnificent.

My very joy for living.

I offer you

the reflection of tomorrow

as I fall in grace

into your eyes

and into your soul,

to swim there as oxygen

feeding your heart

whose adoration I will nurture

and treasure for all time.

 

03/06/13

Author's Note

Reviews

[Leigh]

I like the references to time and the optimism around that because of your love and then the double meaning of the heart in the physical context and the emotional. Another great tribute

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Leigh

[Ravyne Hawke]

beautifully penned, John.. romantic and sensual.. a love letter that any woman would love to receive

[Zahra]

Beautiful piece, i liked the flow. Really nice

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks IHAV

[Nick.B]

Great poem with a beautiful imaginary...well done

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Nick.

[Don Shaw]

Very beautiful piece.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks Don

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is a love letter if ever I have read one...I would love to recieve something like this; hand penned on otherwise stark white paper. Such a beautiful sentiment to praise upon a pedestal the person who holds the key to your heart. Well done.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks Sarah.

[s y e]

Wooing us all with a little romance today, John! This was a beautiful write, awesome job, keep them coming, these are my ultimate faves of yours! :)

- Noodle.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Sye

[s y e]

Pleasure.

[redflutterby]

Perfect love stated with such beautiful verse. Really like this one John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you AMS

[Leslie Philibert]

John returns here to the genre he does so well, a sensitive love poem..

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The wicked wizard will return! Thanks Leslie.