Finding Love

Finding Love

You stood revealed,

offered the knowing of you

to me.

I bowed before you

on bended knee

and watched

you spread your wings of hope.

In that holiest tableau

I saw your beauty captivating;

sweet pleasures buried

in deep and tender eyes,

a radiant heaven kissed smile

that so warmed my soul.

In those magic moments

I saw you,

realised who you truly were.

The Angel I have longed for

had come to claim me,

bringing wondrous gifts,

the like of which I have never seen.

So I reached into your open arms

and fell soft into a welcome space,

so deep and rich

that I simply knew

this is where I should be,

this is where I truly belong.

 

26/04/13

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Romantic and hopeful....just what a poem about the realization of true love should be! ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks AMS

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah the every scared response we have to that love that may or may notopen itself to us, well done, good read.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed Thomas, me thinks it hard to find. Thank you.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Beautiful, passionate, loving and romantic. I think we'd all like to find that "angel" that we've all been waiting for. I am partial to Raphael myself, literally and figuratively. *smiles* This piece has some beautiful language and flow to it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you for such a lovely review Lori.

[s y e]

Woo... Some romance here, John. Very nice! Loved this as always, well pen'd

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you dear poet!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Quite a personality has this narrator, has 'a midsummer nights dream' feel to this one, well penned

[Debra Wedin]

very nice.. i felt that

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Debra. Glad it had an effect on you.

[Debra Wedin]

It did, very much so.
Your welcome!

[Rhianne Ney]

Heart warming and romantic poem (:
100/100

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am glad you liked it Rhianne. Thank you.

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[Claire Twinn]

Heart lifting and so romantic.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Claire!

[Leslie Philibert]

another rich, sensual poem up to John`s high standard..

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so very much Leslie!

[Emerald Seas]

John, you have truly been bitten by the love bug! Written wonderfully, you are definitely inspired. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

True QSS and for the first time. Funny thing is you think you have it until you really have it. Many thanks