You Bring Me Bread

You Bring Me Bread

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

You Bring Me Bread

You bring me bread,

fresh baked and kneaded

with your soft open hands.

You offer yourself

in naked, honest devotion

spread across my bed

in warm, flowing voluptuous

curves.

You hold out hope

and bold salvation,

like a warm poultice

to draw the poison

of the past from

these deep wounds.

Your adoration is like

the warm June sun

stroking my skin

till I am erect with passion,

anticipation and desire

for all of you.

And I would eat this bread

at the altar where

you have laid out

this carnal feast,

but I would break it

with you.

Would drizzle it well

in virgin oils and

sweet, aromatic, dark

 balsamic tastes

and flavour it with strong cheese

and fragrant herbs.

So bake me loaves

that we may share

many flavours together;

pesto, sundried tomatoes,

Parmesan, basil and garlic

and we will dine well

my love.

 

13/11/12

© 2012 John Alexander McFadyen


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I love baking bread.. the flavors, the time it takes... the feel..sigh.. now I'm hungry lol ;) excellently done my friend lol..xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

12 Years Ago

Thank you Lily Mae

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Added on November 13, 2012
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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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